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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well written story, my friend. Some of it might be a bit complicated for children, at least young children. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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This is a well written story, my friend. Some of it might be a bit complicated for children, at least young children. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles rhonnie69 You have a real good non-fiction story along what you found by searching to what cause a Thunder Storm
Like the part of the rain and the veggies.
Gert
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Smiles rhonnie69 You have a real good non-fiction story along what you found by searching to what cause a Thunder Storm
Like the part of the rain and the veggies.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Therese103
This is a humorous and descriptive story, explaining the processes of Nature. A good entry for the non fiction contest! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes.
Blessings, Therese
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This is a humorous and descriptive story, explaining the processes of Nature. A good entry for the non fiction contest! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes.
Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
And the only place desert comes before veggies; ......this is my favorite line but I think you mean dessert...not the hot sandy...ooo is that a mirage ? desert place. I love this rhonnie and I'm going to book case it to read to my class if that's ok?
God bless...besides did you know desserts =stressed backwards?
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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And the only place desert comes before veggies; ......this is my favorite line but I think you mean dessert...not the hot sandy...ooo is that a mirage ? desert place. I love this rhonnie and I'm going to book case it to read to my class if that's ok?
God bless...besides did you know desserts =stressed backwards?
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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HELLO KIWIJENNY: Thank you for your helpful and encouraging review. Thank you for catching my typo and letting me know about it. Jenny, please do read this to your class. That's who I write to, and for; kids like the ones in your class. It would be an honor to me. WOW! A teacher who wants to help me spread my work to who I work for; our children. Thank you, Jenny. Let me know how your class liked it. I really want to know. Cordially: rhonnie69 P.S. desserts = stressed backward. WOW. Hee Hee.
