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Comment from LynnetteOK
Wouldn't it be wonderful if the world could be like that? One thing I would ask Your Coolness is to consider putting elderly people in a position of honor. Their wisdom can be a real asset to the world, but they are so often overlooked.
This is very well written and I love your ideas.
Best of luck in the contest,
LynnetteOK
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if the world could be like that? One thing I would ask Your Coolness is to consider putting elderly people in a position of honor. Their wisdom can be a real asset to the world, but they are so often overlooked.
This is very well written and I love your ideas.
Best of luck in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
As a teacher, I am liking your stance on earning some extra money! ;) You also won me over on treating animals with love and dignity--banning the use of them for sport! Good call! I wish you great luck in the run the world contest.
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As a teacher, I am liking your stance on earning some extra money! ;) You also won me over on treating animals with love and dignity--banning the use of them for sport! Good call! I wish you great luck in the run the world contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Mikey: I think you should submit this to pres t, yes great points he
should try. Anger can only be fed. Homelessness can only be housed. Ignorance can only be educated. Tolerance can only be achieved with blind eyes. All medical needs will be covered one hundred percent with no exceptions. That will be priority number three for tax dollars. Teachers should be paid better. Bernie
had it right by raising people's wages. Good points, Mikey. Fun contest!
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Mikey: I think you should submit this to pres t, yes great points he
should try. Anger can only be fed. Homelessness can only be housed. Ignorance can only be educated. Tolerance can only be achieved with blind eyes. All medical needs will be covered one hundred percent with no exceptions. That will be priority number three for tax dollars. Teachers should be paid better. Bernie
had it right by raising people's wages. Good points, Mikey. Fun contest!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from heart of Lou
I like most of your ideas, and if it came into being, would greatly improve our world. Especially the part about equal wages, and paying productive farmers. Also, if education were free to all, everyone would have an equal opportunity to apply for the highest paying jobs.
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I like most of your ideas, and if it came into being, would greatly improve our world. Especially the part about equal wages, and paying productive farmers. Also, if education were free to all, everyone would have an equal opportunity to apply for the highest paying jobs.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Renee J. St.Germain
Your Coolness,
I absolutely love the creativity you have put into this writing piece! I especially found it interesting and thought provoking about the anonymous interviewing process.
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Your Coolness,
I absolutely love the creativity you have put into this writing piece! I especially found it interesting and thought provoking about the anonymous interviewing process.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from nordicgirl
Hey, this is totally different than it was yesterday! Oh well, it was funnier before. Still, this is a world I would dream of. I agree, it's probably not possible, but working towards these ideals is the idea I think you're going for. Great essay or story. NG
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Hey, this is totally different than it was yesterday! Oh well, it was funnier before. Still, this is a world I would dream of. I agree, it's probably not possible, but working towards these ideals is the idea I think you're going for. Great essay or story. NG
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry and I think your world sounds wonderful. My only problem is I try really hard to educate all of my students, but sometimes things stand in the way. I want everybody to be able to read, write, and do math. Good luck with the contest.
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry and I think your world sounds wonderful. My only problem is I try really hard to educate all of my students, but sometimes things stand in the way. I want everybody to be able to read, write, and do math. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Mikey,
Yes, it sounds like you would be a benevolent ruler. I like your socialistic approach to the new world order.
I really wish our essays could have some sort of impact - do you think we should send them to the Donald?
~patty~
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Hi, Mikey,
Yes, it sounds like you would be a benevolent ruler. I like your socialistic approach to the new world order.
I really wish our essays could have some sort of impact - do you think we should send them to the Donald?
~patty~
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
I think this world already exists in the mind of its creator in 1516, Sir Thomas More. Be called it Utopia. When I read that your version of it paid teachers of writing top salaries drafted my application for a visa. To date I am still waiting for a reply from your civil service. Is the rumour that they don't exist true.
A great read.
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I think this world already exists in the mind of its creator in 1516, Sir Thomas More. Be called it Utopia. When I read that your version of it paid teachers of writing top salaries drafted my application for a visa. To date I am still waiting for a reply from your civil service. Is the rumour that they don't exist true.
A great read.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Robbie Yates
Ha. You did this so well. I love how you've included both humor and some pretty incisive wisdom ("When we begin to debate who the best or least of us might be, we've already placed ourselves at the bottom"). Good luck in the contest!
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Ha. You did this so well. I love how you've included both humor and some pretty incisive wisdom ("When we begin to debate who the best or least of us might be, we've already placed ourselves at the bottom"). Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
