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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I am so sorry to read this. I will send immediate healing on all levels to you. Were you in any of those fuckin' schools that we are hearing are being exposed? I think, Buddism, Wiccan & Native American all have much in common. I'm a dowser, healer, have some Buddism beliefs and the Native American spirituality. I think it was Sun Bear who said, there was no good or evil, it is just about balance. In my Native American authors' books, by the Gears, they speak of the spiral being out of balance. Thank you for sharing this. It makes me appreciate you even more. I honor you with A+
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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I am so sorry to read this. I will send immediate healing on all levels to you. Were you in any of those fuckin' schools that we are hearing are being exposed? I think, Buddism, Wiccan & Native American all have much in common. I'm a dowser, healer, have some Buddism beliefs and the Native American spirituality. I think it was Sun Bear who said, there was no good or evil, it is just about balance. In my Native American authors' books, by the Gears, they speak of the spiral being out of balance. Thank you for sharing this. It makes me appreciate you even more. I honor you with A+
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for reading Liz and your great comments. I like the fact that Buddism, Wiccan and Native American's all have much in common. Wow, a dowser and a healer-those are talents that I also claim. I do believe the teachings of Sun Bear. Me- I was raised and taught in a simple school in Ontario, Canada although it took me two years to learn to be a rightie. Now I just use both, lol. Thank you so much for the shiney ones.
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My mother had her left hand tied behind her back in a public school. She also became anmbidextrous. I think lefties become out of necessity, become Ambi's also. It was handy playing badminton. lol
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One of my healing ministries I feel called to is MMI. I belong to a group where they post missing Indigenous. It is overwhelming. I comment on each post something like 'a shield of protection' & 'healing on all levels.' I feel committed to this calling.
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What a wonderful idea, please send me more information-Alie
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Aww your poor mother, at least I had my left hand tied to the desk, yep that's me-ambidextrous. For me it was baseball, hockey and lacross, I could use either hand.
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you were a force to be reconned with. I was a teacher with the chalkboard to my back gesturing that they should begin on the right side of the paper & go to the left. It messed me up for my left & right. My Yoga teacher used to become frustrated with me, "Liz, your other right." It took me a long time to figure out why I couldn't remember which was my right or left. She must have consciously made the adjustment as she sat facing us.
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It is a facebook group called
Missing and Murdered Native Americans. I have connected with Mona Sespe. She is one of the posters. I just wanted to commend her for the light she brings to such dark work. I told her I sent her healing. She said it was difficult to having to be posting so often and so many young ones. I check in with her every so often to see how she's doing.
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Good to know, the next time I am on Facebook, which I rarely am, I will check out this site. Thanks Liz
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Wow, Liz, that would be confusing, thankfully your yoga teacher clued in.
Comment from Judy Lawless
Hi, our mutual FanStory friend, Helen, told me that you, like me, write a blog, so I thought I'd look you up.
I just read this first chapter and have already learned so much. I think that Wicca better describes my beliefs than what I was taught. Thanks for sharing your knowledge. I look forward to reading more.
Judy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hi, our mutual FanStory friend, Helen, told me that you, like me, write a blog, so I thought I'd look you up.
I just read this first chapter and have already learned so much. I think that Wicca better describes my beliefs than what I was taught. Thanks for sharing your knowledge. I look forward to reading more.
Judy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Judy for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I am so glad that Helen was able to help you.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you so much for clarifying about what "Wiccan" means. I only heard about the ones in the occult. But as you gave us a context of your Native roots and their teaching, it makes sense that you embrace the Creator and the "golden rule" (I love the addition of "do it first!"). I wish I knew more about what you learned at 16, when you "claimed your heritage!"
it just didn't feel right [to?] me.
Were you a preemie? Is that why the priest thought you didn't have long to live? I wasn't supposed to have survived being born a month early. Hooray for babies who prove those negative prophecies wrong!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for clarifying about what "Wiccan" means. I only heard about the ones in the occult. But as you gave us a context of your Native roots and their teaching, it makes sense that you embrace the Creator and the "golden rule" (I love the addition of "do it first!"). I wish I knew more about what you learned at 16, when you "claimed your heritage!"
it just didn't feel right [to?] me.
Were you a preemie? Is that why the priest thought you didn't have long to live? I wasn't supposed to have survived being born a month early. Hooray for babies who prove those negative prophecies wrong!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for reviewing Helen. Yep I was a preemie I had just cleared my 33rd week. I guess the problem was because we lived in a tent in Canada, until just before I went to school. It was large and the kitchen area had an old fashion wood/coal stove, an ice box, shelves for our dishes and food and a table that sat six, then there were two bedrooms across the back with blankets hanging to separate and there was a small potbelly stove between the two. I remember the floor was raised with wood and covered with rugs. When I first came home I slept on the oven door in a six quart basket and when the oven was in use I slept on the heated water reservoir. Okay will fix that in a moment.
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Oh, that must mean you were even more preemie than me. I was about a month too early and no incubators in postwar Korea back then.
I loved your tent home description. I will read more about your life story and hope you included some of that.
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Yep a premie, I am not sure if I did or not. (unsmile)
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Yep a premie, I am not sure if I did or not. (unsmile)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Ayr, I enjoyed learning a little more about you and your story was interesting and easy to read. I liked your last line about finding the good people in life and think that is a great mantra to have. Lovely to meet you and will look forward to reading more. So gld I stopped by Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Hi Ayr, I enjoyed learning a little more about you and your story was interesting and easy to read. I liked your last line about finding the good people in life and think that is a great mantra to have. Lovely to meet you and will look forward to reading more. So gld I stopped by Cheers Christine
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter, I was hesitant but several had asked but then again I sort of got shot down by others, but I have always had the attitude that - 's**t happens and I have a big shovel'- lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alie. I love this chapter. I DO know about the Wiccan religion and that it's all good stuff. Also know practicing Wiccans and now I know you, too. I have explored other religions throughout my life and I think it's wonderful to know about all of them. I'm still Catholic and as I grow older, it's retaken it's importance in my life. I wholeheartedly agree with the Creator, being grateful for all that's good, and live by--"do what you will, but harm no one." Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Hi Alie. I love this chapter. I DO know about the Wiccan religion and that it's all good stuff. Also know practicing Wiccans and now I know you, too. I have explored other religions throughout my life and I think it's wonderful to know about all of them. I'm still Catholic and as I grow older, it's retaken it's importance in my life. I wholeheartedly agree with the Creator, being grateful for all that's good, and live by--"do what you will, but harm no one." Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Awww thank you Marilyn, I really appreciate your kind comments. I am so glad that you have had the chance to explore other religions.
Comment from Aussie
I am pleased with the account of your search of who you are. My grandmother was Aboriginal. Back in the fifties, we were not considered Australian, we couldn't vote and our land was grabbed by the whites. Times change; we now have aboriginal land rights.
There will always be the stigma because of our skin colour. Not much different to you. I went through the religious carry-on and then found Bahaime (Creator of all living things) we worship nature, revere her animals and tolerate (hopefully) the white man's ways! In my portfolio, you will find my Stories of the Dreamtime if you are interested my friend. Blessings, Kay.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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I am pleased with the account of your search of who you are. My grandmother was Aboriginal. Back in the fifties, we were not considered Australian, we couldn't vote and our land was grabbed by the whites. Times change; we now have aboriginal land rights.
There will always be the stigma because of our skin colour. Not much different to you. I went through the religious carry-on and then found Bahaime (Creator of all living things) we worship nature, revere her animals and tolerate (hopefully) the white man's ways! In my portfolio, you will find my Stories of the Dreamtime if you are interested my friend. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your kind comments and that you shared your basic history. I guess we each find what we need to so that we can continue. I will definitely look into your Stories of Dreamtime and I also want to read about Bahaime. Blessings to you as well Kay, Alie.
Comment from Spitfire
Wiccan sounds much like the metaphysical beliefs I embrace. You certainly have a unique voice in your prose. Personality comes through as vivacious and fun.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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Wiccan sounds much like the metaphysical beliefs I embrace. You certainly have a unique voice in your prose. Personality comes through as vivacious and fun.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for your kind and interesting comments.
Comment from Mabaker
Oh, sweet Alie, I understand how you feel the need to sneak around the subject of being Wiccan, so no 'white fella' sensibilities get hurt. Bugger them Alie. You are you, not a carbon-copy of every other religion and half-baked stupidity, but a true recipient of your core belief. Cats won't stay with evil humans. They know your soul is free to believe. With all my respect. Anne.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Oh, sweet Alie, I understand how you feel the need to sneak around the subject of being Wiccan, so no 'white fella' sensibilities get hurt. Bugger them Alie. You are you, not a carbon-copy of every other religion and half-baked stupidity, but a true recipient of your core belief. Cats won't stay with evil humans. They know your soul is free to believe. With all my respect. Anne.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Big smile, big hugs and I luv u Anne, you are a great person and a fantastic friend and a fellow lover of cats.
Comment from poetwatch
This is good information Alie. It is nice to know that I have a Wicca for a friend. I have no qualms in what your religion is. This is a free country as long as no harm is done. It is interesting, for I feel the forces of nature speak sometimes. Then again, it could be just my desire to hear. This is a good chapter of your life. Keep up the good work and ride that RV all over the country and use the broom to sweep. :) A speaker of the truth with a little twist. ;)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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This is good information Alie. It is nice to know that I have a Wicca for a friend. I have no qualms in what your religion is. This is a free country as long as no harm is done. It is interesting, for I feel the forces of nature speak sometimes. Then again, it could be just my desire to hear. This is a good chapter of your life. Keep up the good work and ride that RV all over the country and use the broom to sweep. :) A speaker of the truth with a little twist. ;)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Awww thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your kind comments. Ahaaaa always listen with your heart! Now come on, I have to pretend once in a while that the broom is a good means of transportation lol. Again thanks.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very enjoyable write -- I look forward to more! :) ;) Your story flows well without getting bogged down in unnecessary details -- your descriptions are precise and to the point. Good job. :) ;) :) I have listed below some grammatical catches that should, perhaps, be addressed. :) Thank you for sharing today! :) :)
"Now the bad part of this was that I was unfortunately, yet fortunate to be" -- 'Now, the bad part of this was that I was, unfortunately yet fortunate, to be'
"Boy did I surprise" -- 'Boy, did I surprise'
"process imagine my" -- 'process, imagine my'
"Sure I could have just gone with Catholic, but in my heart I was" -- 'Sure, I could have just gone with Catholic, but, in my heart, I was'
"I was native" [is a bit awkward standing alone -- perhaps indigenous person or native american (although I know you are of Canadian descent..)]
"{no disrespect intended}" [you already said such in your title cap - no need to put it in the body of your chapter - if folks are offended, then they did not listen to you in the beginning...]
"Then quite by accident I learned" -- 'Then, quite by accident, I learned'
"Wiccans and even more interesting was the fact that it was" -- 'Wiccans; even more interesting was the fact that Wicca was'
"beliefs of the Indians" [whatever you decide to use for 'native' further up in the piece, use it here to -- be consistent so as not to confuse a reader unfamiliar to all of the terms, etc]
"myself and I could" -- 'myself, and I could'
"with that. Do we" -- 'with that. [new paragraph here] Do we'
"Daily, we give thanks for what we have been blessed with" -- 'We give thanks daily for that with which we have been blessed.'
"surround us and if others" -- 'surround us, and if others'
"the golden rule, I remember" -- 'the golden rule. I remember'
"school age, 'do onto others as you would have them do onto you' but they added 'just do it first.' " -- 'school age: Do unto others as you would have them do unto you, but they added just do it first. ' [use italics for your quote here to eliminate the multiple italics - they are a distraction from what you are trying to say]
"adventures, unless you wish to know more via a private message." -- 'adventures.' [the rest belongs in your author notes, not the body of your chapter]
And don't be afraid to use a few exclamations marks especially when you "exclaim" -- they work well in the casual style of your prose here! :) :) :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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A very enjoyable write -- I look forward to more! :) ;) Your story flows well without getting bogged down in unnecessary details -- your descriptions are precise and to the point. Good job. :) ;) :) I have listed below some grammatical catches that should, perhaps, be addressed. :) Thank you for sharing today! :) :)
"Now the bad part of this was that I was unfortunately, yet fortunate to be" -- 'Now, the bad part of this was that I was, unfortunately yet fortunate, to be'
"Boy did I surprise" -- 'Boy, did I surprise'
"process imagine my" -- 'process, imagine my'
"Sure I could have just gone with Catholic, but in my heart I was" -- 'Sure, I could have just gone with Catholic, but, in my heart, I was'
"I was native" [is a bit awkward standing alone -- perhaps indigenous person or native american (although I know you are of Canadian descent..)]
"{no disrespect intended}" [you already said such in your title cap - no need to put it in the body of your chapter - if folks are offended, then they did not listen to you in the beginning...]
"Then quite by accident I learned" -- 'Then, quite by accident, I learned'
"Wiccans and even more interesting was the fact that it was" -- 'Wiccans; even more interesting was the fact that Wicca was'
"beliefs of the Indians" [whatever you decide to use for 'native' further up in the piece, use it here to -- be consistent so as not to confuse a reader unfamiliar to all of the terms, etc]
"myself and I could" -- 'myself, and I could'
"with that. Do we" -- 'with that. [new paragraph here] Do we'
"Daily, we give thanks for what we have been blessed with" -- 'We give thanks daily for that with which we have been blessed.'
"surround us and if others" -- 'surround us, and if others'
"the golden rule, I remember" -- 'the golden rule. I remember'
"school age, 'do onto others as you would have them do onto you' but they added 'just do it first.' " -- 'school age: Do unto others as you would have them do unto you, but they added just do it first. ' [use italics for your quote here to eliminate the multiple italics - they are a distraction from what you are trying to say]
"adventures, unless you wish to know more via a private message." -- 'adventures.' [the rest belongs in your author notes, not the body of your chapter]
And don't be afraid to use a few exclamations marks especially when you "exclaim" -- they work well in the casual style of your prose here! :) :) :)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate you constructive comments and will make those corrections in a few minutes.
