Precious Gems
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the contest prompt, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. Your picture is a nice pairing with the words & gives readers much to think about as does your well chosen words. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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You did a good job with the contest prompt, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. Your picture is a nice pairing with the words & gives readers much to think about as does your well chosen words. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments, rating and best wishes.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
Very nice use of time in the wording
I thought the last line would be, All too soon.
Perfect match to the interesting picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
Very nice use of time in the wording
I thought the last line would be, All too soon.
Perfect match to the interesting picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Dear rspoet, Thank you for your comments and rating and good luck wishes.