Let the Sunshine In
6 word poem9 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good contest entry for the 6 word contest, Fayesh. I love your picture selection. Your 6 words, as required, have a great message. Good job & best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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This is a good contest entry for the 6 word contest, Fayesh. I love your picture selection. Your 6 words, as required, have a great message. Good job & best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from miajaffri
I like the alliteration in your six word poem and the message given that sunshine fills despair. It reminds me of once reading, "All living things lead toward the light."
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I like the alliteration in your six word poem and the message given that sunshine fills despair. It reminds me of once reading, "All living things lead toward the light."
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a nice, optimistic use of six words. This contest is my favorite to review. I like to see what images people can convey in so few words. Of course, yours is hope. But it is also warmth and contentment. If the dark places are filled with light, they are now light. Darkness is gone. These are good thoughts that you convey.
Nice artwork as well. I wish that you could put a hint of gold in it, like the outline border. Or golden words in a gray background. That might emphasize the hope aspect instead of just the darkness. It is good like it is. I just like to optimize the use of color.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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What a nice, optimistic use of six words. This contest is my favorite to review. I like to see what images people can convey in so few words. Of course, yours is hope. But it is also warmth and contentment. If the dark places are filled with light, they are now light. Darkness is gone. These are good thoughts that you convey.
Nice artwork as well. I wish that you could put a hint of gold in it, like the outline border. Or golden words in a gray background. That might emphasize the hope aspect instead of just the darkness. It is good like it is. I just like to optimize the use of color.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. Your comments are appreciated. F_
Comment from fm wright
A very wonderful poem expressing literal and even, I would say, figurative sunshine as a sign of the conveyance of hope. Beautifully written. Good entry on the six word contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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A very wonderful poem expressing literal and even, I would say, figurative sunshine as a sign of the conveyance of hope. Beautifully written. Good entry on the six word contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from donette1914
outstanding and i like the message of hope in the darkest places
thank you for sharing this well-penned work you had made
i like the artwork and how creative you are
it was a pleasure
donette1914 Aug 15 2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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outstanding and i like the message of hope in the darkest places
thank you for sharing this well-penned work you had made
i like the artwork and how creative you are
it was a pleasure
donette1914 Aug 15 2018
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from Therese103
This is a very good entry for the six word poetry contest! the picture you chose enhances it because of the black and white symbolizing'' darkest places'' with the sun beams. thank you for sharing! Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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This is a very good entry for the six word poetry contest! the picture you chose enhances it because of the black and white symbolizing'' darkest places'' with the sun beams. thank you for sharing! Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from Adri7enne
Can't dispute that. Even the heaviest heart can be lifted with sunshine and lots of light. You have the word count right and you chose a good artwork to illustrate your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Can't dispute that. Even the heaviest heart can be lifted with sunshine and lots of light. You have the word count right and you chose a good artwork to illustrate your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from Robbie Yates
Nice six-word poem, Fayesh. I like the way it is fairly general, but yet could be the setting or description of a specific place where sunshine helps brighten an otherwise sad scene. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Nice six-word poem, Fayesh. I like the way it is fairly general, but yet could be the setting or description of a specific place where sunshine helps brighten an otherwise sad scene. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem. F_
Comment from Ogden
This is an excellent and economical haiku, in a mere seven syllables. I hope the Committee appreciates it.
Good luck in the 'Six Word Poetry' contest, Fayesh.
Don
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent and economical haiku, in a mere seven syllables. I hope the Committee appreciates it.
Good luck in the 'Six Word Poetry' contest, Fayesh.
Don
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my six word poem.
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You're very welcome, Fayesh.
Don