Comment from KL Williams

Excellent

Ha! That's a funny story, and definitely a surprise question considering. Lol However, I know boys can come up with some off the wall things. Great job, and best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018

Hello!! Thank you for taking the time to read and review! i do appreciate it! and yes, boys! LOL

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a cute little story
Quick thinking Danny saved the day
by not saying what he really thought!
I don't think he would have been scarred,
but he might have smiled a lot.
Excellent story with a nice ending
good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018

Hey you!! I got your book :-) i'll start reading soon....thanks for the review! ..it's a funny little memory that makes me smile.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ha ha ha ha ...kids are adorable...this says general fiction but I can see this happening for real. I love the picture. So CUTE
And it's a good thing our kids are so cute some of the things they do
God bless

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018

lol it happened! Ill go and change that..Thanks for reading and the review!!!

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

how funny!! kids say the darndest things and this is so cute of all time while your taking a bath
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read your work
i hope you do really well on the contest
donette1914 Aug 14 2018

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018

Thank you Donette for the sweet fun review!!