Little Boys!
80 words or less..14 total reviews
Comment from BunnyS
This is such a cute story. It is also very believable...children are so innocent and could really care a less about a naked body. Most young children have absolutely no concept of privacy and this story made me think of several uncomfortable situations with my children and grandchildren. :) The surprise element was definitely there, but mostly, it made me smile. Good job!!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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This is such a cute story. It is also very believable...children are so innocent and could really care a less about a naked body. Most young children have absolutely no concept of privacy and this story made me think of several uncomfortable situations with my children and grandchildren. :) The surprise element was definitely there, but mostly, it made me smile. Good job!!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you for reading and this sweet review!!! Yes, i think all mothers probably have a story likw this! Thank again..:-)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
SURPRISE...don't forget those earrings! What a great ending! And, one that I did not expect. Cute story and you did a wonderful job in expressing details in under 80 words. A solid entry for this contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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SURPRISE...don't forget those earrings! What a great ending! And, one that I did not expect. Cute story and you did a wonderful job in expressing details in under 80 words. A solid entry for this contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Hi Cindy!Thank you so very much for reading and for the sweet review! This is just such a funny memory for me!... i was telling a friend of mine, that I used to make earrings. My son loved to "help"..I think he just loved seeing me wear them. but still, lol perfect timing! never expected that! haha
Comment from humpwhistle
Excellent response to the prompt. Surprise is 80 words.
God Bless little Danny, who viewed the situation from
his innocent blue eyes. The mother's reaction over-reactive.
Passes the 'truth test' for me.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Excellent response to the prompt. Surprise is 80 words.
God Bless little Danny, who viewed the situation from
his innocent blue eyes. The mother's reaction over-reactive.
Passes the 'truth test' for me.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Lee! I just love this review! Thank you so much for reading. And an extra star??? awww :-)))
It is a sweet memory. :-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This eighty-word story, Little Boys, sounds just about right for what little tots think they've discovered. I still recall walking in on my aunt and uncle in their undies going wild. I figured they were getting each other dressed. I may still think that.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This eighty-word story, Little Boys, sounds just about right for what little tots think they've discovered. I still recall walking in on my aunt and uncle in their undies going wild. I figured they were getting each other dressed. I may still think that.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Bill that is funny!...memories huh :-) Thanks for reading and the sweet review! I do appreciate it!
Comment from LynnetteOK
I completely related to this story, being a mother myself. It's always amazing what they notice. My youngest son was in his late teens when he busted me using instant potatoes. He was so shocked he could hardly speak, lol.
Very well written and definitely gave me a laugh.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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I completely related to this story, being a mother myself. It's always amazing what they notice. My youngest son was in his late teens when he busted me using instant potatoes. He was so shocked he could hardly speak, lol.
Very well written and definitely gave me a laugh.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Lynnette, what a funny story!..but don't you just love those memories? :-) Thanks for reading and for the great review!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
This is an excellent contest entry which summons up the images of little Danny's moments of utter scary surprise. Will he be scarred for life? Only time will tell!
Good luck in this contest and have a good day...........Jim
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent contest entry which summons up the images of little Danny's moments of utter scary surprise. Will he be scarred for life? Only time will tell!
Good luck in this contest and have a good day...........Jim
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Jimmy! thank you
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a charming surprise. I'll have to remember to utilize a child's words next time that I need a surprise ending. Your photo and conclusion make this piece work. It is delightful. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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What a charming surprise. I'll have to remember to utilize a child's words next time that I need a surprise ending. Your photo and conclusion make this piece work. It is delightful. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Hi Debbie, thank you for reading and for the review..i do appreciate it! :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
Ha! Apparently you wore earrings so regularly that young Danny considered them an essential recognition feature of your face. It is a tribute to the way you raised him that nothing else about your appearance at that moment seemed more worthy of comment. Certainly, no harm was done. Only adults see the humor in this episode. Superb, and delightfully illustrated.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Ha! Apparently you wore earrings so regularly that young Danny considered them an essential recognition feature of your face. It is a tribute to the way you raised him that nothing else about your appearance at that moment seemed more worthy of comment. Certainly, no harm was done. Only adults see the humor in this episode. Superb, and delightfully illustrated.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Mike! hugs! thanks for the corrections...and for yet again, another fantastic review! Your insights are amazing. :-)
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You are most welcome. I see the corrections and have removed the comments about them. Also, your delightful post is apparently doing well in its contest. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is hilarious. This is an excellent entry in the contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, who by the way, is the smartest chimp on earth, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This is hilarious. This is an excellent entry in the contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, who by the way, is the smartest chimp on earth, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Your personal advisor is a chimp? This explains a lot.
Comment from Therese103
Very funny! I think the picture you chose well portrays the innocent surprise of a little boy. The things kids say, LOL. Well done! I wish you all the best in the contest!
Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Very funny! I think the picture you chose well portrays the innocent surprise of a little boy. The things kids say, LOL. Well done! I wish you all the best in the contest!
Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Hi therese, thank you for the sweet review! I do appreciate you taking the time :-)))
