Reflections
a poem in one stanza4 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello fm wright
I like your poem about how you see and reflect what you believe of what you actually see
I'm glad that you jotted down your thoughts
to me it makes one wonder what they are viewing is really real.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Hello fm wright
I like your poem about how you see and reflect what you believe of what you actually see
I'm glad that you jotted down your thoughts
to me it makes one wonder what they are viewing is really real.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you Gert for taking time to read my poem. Also for the excellent rating and very kind comments.
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You are very welcome fm wright
Gert
Comment from BeasPeas
Good luck in the contest with this interesting entry. Sometimes we challenge what is real and what isn't, but if it's real to us it. Nicely composed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Good luck in the contest with this interesting entry. Sometimes we challenge what is real and what isn't, but if it's real to us it. Nicely composed. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you ever so much BeasPeas for the excellent rating and your kind comments. And yes, I admit it is unusual but the way I jotted it down seemed ideal for this particular contest.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such an intriguing and unique piece...love the way it is written from the viewpoint of an "ignorant" observer to draw out such a wonderfully descriptive narrative of the observations of nature simply in the reflections of a still pond...wonderfully done!! :) :) It's no wonder you chose this as your best - it is certainly memorable!! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Such an intriguing and unique piece...love the way it is written from the viewpoint of an "ignorant" observer to draw out such a wonderfully descriptive narrative of the observations of nature simply in the reflections of a still pond...wonderfully done!! :) :) It's no wonder you chose this as your best - it is certainly memorable!! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you Y.M. Roger for the excellent rating and wonderful comments. I am most humbled.
Comment from heart of Lou
You have written a very interesting take on a reflection in the water. At first I wondered what crazy poem is this, but then when it got to the reflection, it all fell in place. Nice!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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You have written a very interesting take on a reflection in the water. At first I wondered what crazy poem is this, but then when it got to the reflection, it all fell in place. Nice!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent rating and your comments. I wasn't sure how it would be received. I am most humbled. And I get you on the crazy part.