Precious Gems
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "September"Na-po-wri-mo
8 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi dovemarie. There is fall foliage in New England already? Here it is still blazing hot. Foliage does not change here until it cools off more. Also the spring blossoms won't come as long as the weather is cold. Fall is my favorite season. Heat of summer is not my thing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Hi dovemarie. There is fall foliage in New England already? Here it is still blazing hot. Foliage does not change here until it cools off more. Also the spring blossoms won't come as long as the weather is cold. Fall is my favorite season. Heat of summer is not my thing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Dear Pamusart, Thank you for your comments and rating. I'm getting a little ahead of myself, there is no fall foliage here as yet, but I'm anticipating it. I love it. Thank you for your good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Autumnal hues and falling leaves remind us all that the summer is over and the season is changing, your words create a perfect picture of September and it may look much better if it was left alighned, just a suggestion Donna, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Autumnal hues and falling leaves remind us all that the summer is over and the season is changing, your words create a perfect picture of September and it may look much better if it was left alighned, just a suggestion Donna, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and rating, not sure what you meant by your suggestion, left aligned, but could you write me back and tell me? Donna
Comment from zanya
Yes a timely reminder of the significant seasonal change now upon us as we change the calendar to September -'Swirling, multi-hued leaves '- lovely pic
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Yes a timely reminder of the significant seasonal change now upon us as we change the calendar to September -'Swirling, multi-hued leaves '- lovely pic
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear zanya, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with vivid
imagery that creates a word
picture of autumn:
"Beautiful colors floating in the air"
-I also like the rhyme in the last two lines.
-Good luck in the contest, dovemarie.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with vivid
imagery that creates a word
picture of autumn:
"Beautiful colors floating in the air"
-I also like the rhyme in the last two lines.
-Good luck in the contest, dovemarie.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear Pam (respa) Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes. Dove
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You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from zlp22
Nice and bright poem. September is my favorite month, it's cooling down and the trees and flowers look so pretty. Good flow of words makes poem easy to read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Nice and bright poem. September is my favorite month, it's cooling down and the trees and flowers look so pretty. Good flow of words makes poem easy to read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear zip22, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
Comment from Ann Marie Anglin
Such an apt topic for a New Englander! Very nice imagery, perfect choice of artwork to supplement your poem. The days growing shorter, the twilight descending earlier. Fall is a beautiful time of year. You capture the "feeling" of September very well. Good job, and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Such an apt topic for a New Englander! Very nice imagery, perfect choice of artwork to supplement your poem. The days growing shorter, the twilight descending earlier. Fall is a beautiful time of year. You capture the "feeling" of September very well. Good job, and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear Ann Marie, Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written acrostic poem you have penned about the beautiful foliage where you live in New England. I love your descriptive words and lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written acrostic poem you have penned about the beautiful foliage where you live in New England. I love your descriptive words and lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes. Love, Donna
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you are so welcome my friend. I enjoyed reading this!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about September month when the seasons start changing slowly again in the Northern hemisphere it turns to autumn and winter and in the Southern hemisphere from winter to Spring and summer.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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A very well-written acrostic poem about September month when the seasons start changing slowly again in the Northern hemisphere it turns to autumn and winter and in the Southern hemisphere from winter to Spring and summer.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove