Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Soulmates"My book of poems and stories
17 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
Loved this. Artwork special as well. Just going through all my reviews for my biography to get ready for publishing. Do an Acknowledgement page just came across a review you did. I had thought you had done more but not sure.
Glad to see some reviewers are still on FS. A lot have left.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Loved this. Artwork special as well. Just going through all my reviews for my biography to get ready for publishing. Do an Acknowledgement page just came across a review you did. I had thought you had done more but not sure.
Glad to see some reviewers are still on FS. A lot have left.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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I thank you very much for your kind review. I have been ill and have not been on the site for a while. All the best to you.
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Good hearing from you. Hope you are better.
Comment from Lulube
Soulmates, thought I met two but the age difference put a block in between us. I feel that luck plays a very important role for a soulmate to survive the relationship as well.
lulube
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Soulmates, thought I met two but the age difference put a block in between us. I feel that luck plays a very important role for a soulmate to survive the relationship as well.
lulube
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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I am so sorry for your loss in relationships. I have had mine as well but have seen some beautiful ones go on forever. It is great when it works. Thanks for your review.
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lol I'm getting too old to think about a soulmate now.
lulube
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, how very cute is this? It says everything in six little sentences. It's very simplicity is it's charm. I love it. Great entry!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Well, how very cute is this? It says everything in six little sentences. It's very simplicity is it's charm. I love it. Great entry!
Blessings...
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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It is great when it works. I have seen some beautiful ones go on forever. Thanks for your review. Have a great day.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Young love is great when everything is fresh and new. The only thing better is mature love that stands the test of time and continues to grow stronger and stronger.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Young love is great when everything is fresh and new. The only thing better is mature love that stands the test of time and continues to grow stronger and stronger.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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It is great when it works. I have seen some beautiful ones go on forever. Thanks for your review. Have a great day.
Comment from WalkerMan
Sometimes it does take a long time -- even several years -- for two people to realize that they are better together than either of them likely would be with anyone else. The resultant life can be most pleasant, as well as resilient in times of stress. You effectively express all that in your three rhyming couplets. Well done, and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Sometimes it does take a long time -- even several years -- for two people to realize that they are better together than either of them likely would be with anyone else. The resultant life can be most pleasant, as well as resilient in times of stress. You effectively express all that in your three rhyming couplets. Well done, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your warm, kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to go ever my entry. Have a good day.
Comment from donette1914
this is so romantic and so heartfelt and so believable.
thank you for putting so much into this piece
very well penned
I really like your artwork
it was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing
I hope you do well in the contest
donette1914 Aug13, 2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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this is so romantic and so heartfelt and so believable.
thank you for putting so much into this piece
very well penned
I really like your artwork
it was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing
I hope you do well in the contest
donette1914 Aug13, 2018
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your warm, kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to go ever my entry. Have a good day.
Comment from Mastery
Very well done, Annie. Simplistic but so very authentic-sounding. I wish you good luck in the contest. I think this is the winner, myself. I liked this especially well:
"And yet it took me years to see
That you're the only one for me"
Good job. Bob
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Very well done, Annie. Simplistic but so very authentic-sounding. I wish you good luck in the contest. I think this is the winner, myself. I liked this especially well:
"And yet it took me years to see
That you're the only one for me"
Good job. Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time and talents in reviewing my entry.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the unbelievable knowledge that someone can love another very deeply and knows that person is the only one that they can be happy with forever.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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A very well-written poem about the unbelievable knowledge that someone can love another very deeply and knows that person is the only one that they can be happy with forever.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time and talents in reviewing my entry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Annie, with your contest entry. I like the rhyming couplets. They tell a great story of true soulmates. Your picture is a nice pairing with your words. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Good job, Annie, with your contest entry. I like the rhyming couplets. They tell a great story of true soulmates. Your picture is a nice pairing with your words. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time and talents in reviewing my entry.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Perfectly done in rhyme and meter. Short but the message of love is very clear and when it lasts in this day and age, it is even better. Very nice for the contest
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Perfectly done in rhyme and meter. Short but the message of love is very clear and when it lasts in this day and age, it is even better. Very nice for the contest
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time and talents in reviewing my entry.
