Vegetables
Eating for a healthy life.65 total reviews
Comment from Therese103
This is a good acrostic poem for the contest! Reminding us to keep those veggies in our diets, and giving reasons to do so. Well done! Wishing you all the best in the contest! Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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This is a good acrostic poem for the contest! Reminding us to keep those veggies in our diets, and giving reasons to do so. Well done! Wishing you all the best in the contest! Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from donette1914
very well done on the benefits of eating vegetables
very heartfelt and well penned
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
very good artwork
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 13, 2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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very well done on the benefits of eating vegetables
very heartfelt and well penned
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
very good artwork
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 13, 2018
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from kingpin.101
The poem sounds like it should be on a poster in the school nurse's office as a friendly to remind them to stay healthy. Clever and witty, this acronym is perfect for little kids.
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The poem sounds like it should be on a poster in the school nurse's office as a friendly to remind them to stay healthy. Clever and witty, this acronym is perfect for little kids.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and idea.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very nicely done acrostic AND educational...would be a great school assignment, both for health and science purposes AND art! Great topic, great choice of art.
Good luck with this. I like it very much!
Wendy
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Very nicely done acrostic AND educational...would be a great school assignment, both for health and science purposes AND art! Great topic, great choice of art.
Good luck with this. I like it very much!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from gramag4
Such a clever way to introduce the delicious elements of "health". I enjoyed the smooth flow of the poem and the way that you captured so much in such a few words. Very well done!
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Such a clever way to introduce the delicious elements of "health". I enjoyed the smooth flow of the poem and the way that you captured so much in such a few words. Very well done!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Mike J
Nice poem, I'm sending it to my kids, young nieces and nephews, the message can be useful to them haha. Nice entry, good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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Nice poem, I'm sending it to my kids, young nieces and nephews, the message can be useful to them haha. Nice entry, good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments, sharing, and contest wishes.
Comment from bard owl
Your acrostic gives credence to the oft time repeated statement, "Eat your vegetables." In it you explain the advantages of vegetables and fruit, and the last two lines give a sound conclusion.
I personally love veggies and fruit, sometimes with meat and sweets on the side.
This is a very functional acrostic and should be part of every dietitian's reading material. Excellent read.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Your acrostic gives credence to the oft time repeated statement, "Eat your vegetables." In it you explain the advantages of vegetables and fruit, and the last two lines give a sound conclusion.
I personally love veggies and fruit, sometimes with meat and sweets on the side.
This is a very functional acrostic and should be part of every dietitian's reading material. Excellent read.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your nice review and comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Wow! great job. I tried writing a name poem before, but my entry was rejected. They said DKDHJSDIUUCJJD did't name anything. Picky, picky, picky. See if I ever enter one of their dumb contests again.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Wow! great job. I tried writing a name poem before, but my entry was rejected. They said DKDHJSDIUUCJJD did't name anything. Picky, picky, picky. See if I ever enter one of their dumb contests again.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. I have won a couple, and placed third on this one. Try again. RJ
Comment from zlp22
Very interesting. I think more people are healthy now than ever before. If that helps you live longer only time will tell. Good flow of words and great picture.
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Very interesting. I think more people are healthy now than ever before. If that helps you live longer only time will tell. Good flow of words and great picture.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. RJ
Comment from Shanbreen
This is a good acrostic poem, and a good reminder of the importance of vegies in our diet. The poem flows well. I think you should do well on this one in the contest. All the best.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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This is a good acrostic poem, and a good reminder of the importance of vegies in our diet. The poem flows well. I think you should do well on this one in the contest. All the best.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments.
