Word Count
A 200 word story13 total reviews
Comment from Beck Fenton
Ah, what to write, what to write... You wrote what goes through a writer's mind when sitting down to a prompt, especially such a restricted one as this. Good luck with the contest. You have a funny... no, humorous story!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Ah, what to write, what to write... You wrote what goes through a writer's mind when sitting down to a prompt, especially such a restricted one as this. Good luck with the contest. You have a funny... no, humorous story!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hi Beck, Thanks for reading my no story, I tried but couldnt come up with one LOL so this will have to do Cheers much appreciate your time
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
Not bad in a 200-wordish sort of way, but you should have written about your bitter fears of getting old and sad like your cat with Alzheimer's, the one which ate the cancerous parrot that your dead wife's ex-lover bought her - remember? when you were about to divorce her, but the Good Lord intervened, and your cheating wife had a stroke and yet it all worked out right in the end when you forgave her just before she died.
And everyone was happy.
Except for the cat,
and then the parrot.
That's the one I wanted to read.
Maybe next time
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hello Anon
Not bad in a 200-wordish sort of way, but you should have written about your bitter fears of getting old and sad like your cat with Alzheimer's, the one which ate the cancerous parrot that your dead wife's ex-lover bought her - remember? when you were about to divorce her, but the Good Lord intervened, and your cheating wife had a stroke and yet it all worked out right in the end when you forgave her just before she died.
And everyone was happy.
Except for the cat,
and then the parrot.
That's the one I wanted to read.
Maybe next time
cheers
phill
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hi Phil, Oh my dear what a best seller that one would be I wil get writing right away. Does it have to ne a parrot though would a budgie be OK . What was I saying oh yes Thanks for reading my attempt at the 200 words. oh oh word count Cheers Anon
Comment from tfawcus
This fits the rules just fine. I'm just worried that I won't be allowed to use any of those words or themes in my response. Imagine if those subjects were banned on FS for a week. There wouldn't be much posted - except by those who write about their religion, and even they would be constrained, not being able to use the L-word.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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This fits the rules just fine. I'm just worried that I won't be allowed to use any of those words or themes in my response. Imagine if those subjects were banned on FS for a week. There wouldn't be much posted - except by those who write about their religion, and even they would be constrained, not being able to use the L-word.
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hi Tony, Ha Ha, Yes Agreed, Thanks for reading my 200 words , bloody hard to do when one is limited but I gave it a crack and well best I could do and yes there wouldn't be much posted LOL Cheers
