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A 200 word story

13 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Christine. You're right. The rules are pretty restrictive. Not much out there that's safe. Love what you actually DID write about and that is--the impossibility of writing for this contest. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
    Hi Marilyn, Sorry for delay in answering bit Thanks for reading my story. Ha Ha just had to have a go I got a thrd place unexpected so a bonus Cheers Christine
Comment from zlp22
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Very interesting. I did not count the words so I do not know if you went over. Good luck anyway. Flow of words makes it easy to read and funny. Great story.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
    Hi Zip22 Thanks so mich for reading my story and aploogy for the delay in answering you. i had fun with this and it even got me a third place Ha Ha bonus Cheers Christine
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for stuffing so much humor into a very small size dress. Well done, I enjoyed this short piece immensely. You were able to put back the substance that was the forbidden topic and offer up in its place, the the perils of writing within strict guidelines. Your constant lamenting throughout brought me into the fellowship of writers, as this is something we all do.

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
    Hi Sally, Thank you for reading my story it was fun to write and glad tou enjoyed Cheers Christine I gained a third place with it so that was a bonus. Apology for delay in replying
reply by Sally Law on 19-Aug-2018
    Congrats! No apologies are necessary as we are all busy with the other things we are involved in, mainly life.
    Sally
Comment from meeshu
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it is very comical and nicely rambling. it reminds of that great thespian Bugs Bunny and the timeless " SHEDDEP, SHETTIN' UP" bit. a classic..

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Hi meeshu, Thanks for your review rambling whaaaat really LOL No all in good fun I hope Cheers
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Ya know, Anonymous Author, I hate to admit this because I really do love a challenge.
But I don't believe I would've even attempted this prompt.
I mean, what the hell is everyone supposed to write about?
There's always dragons, faeries, Vikings and trolls.
There are hobbits, Roman Centurions, sharks and Jesus (not necessarily in that order, ahem).
Ya know, come to think of it, I might have been able to come up with something after all.
What a crrrrrrrazy list of rules!
Good luck to you in the contest.
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~Dean

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Hi Dean, thanks so much and I had a little tiny bit of fun well no lots of fun thinking this up and managed to avoid writing a story at all LOL I am aure you would have come up with something Next time Cheers my friend
reply by Dean Kuch on 13-Aug-2018
    Cheers, and good luck!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I hate contests that limit you to a specific word count or poetry that tells you how many syllables to write. It's not creative if it's over 17 syllables or rhymes when we don't wait too.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Hi Thomas, Thank you so much for your fabulous review and stars. I love them And how could one pass up this challenge I ask you so many restrictions and i managed to avoid them all Cheers
Comment from Mabaker
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That was good writing and also it was a change from blood and guts. They are getting a bit over-the-top I think. Yours had tongue in cheek humour. I sincerely hope you fare well in the contest. If you haven't exceeded your word...oops.
Sincerely Anne

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
    Hi Anne Thanks for you review and on a cpint back I was one short ha ha so I have added one I hope my maths is right Cheers
Comment from DragonSkulls
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Ha ha ha. That was hilarious. I like how you steered clear of even using the words on the list, lol. You were able to mention them, just not have your story about them. I know, it doesn't leave much room after all the main factors are gone but hey. I figured there would be a couple that wrote about my restrictions and anticipated reading their entries. This one didn't disappoint. Lol. Thank you for jumping in my little contest and for the chuckle. I wish you luck in the booth. Have a great weekend. Love the picture.

DS

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
    Hi Hi DS. I am soooo pleased you found my attempt on your restrictions hilarious. Even my husband laughed when I read it too him. I am sure you will get lots of good stories despite the 'list' of not to be mentioned. and Thanks for seeing my humour in word count and for your luck wishes. I had fun writing this Cheers
Comment from Therese103
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Funny! With so many restrictions on what kind of story you're allowed to write, it must be hard to come up with ideas. All the best to you in the contest!
Blessings, Therese

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
    Hi Therese, Thank you for reading my story or lack of. I enjoyed having fun with the requirements and it has worked so far Cheers to you
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good choice of image.
-I like your humorous take on the prompt.
-It is well organized and shows the
difficulty your muse is having.
-I like many of your descriptions
of what you could say, but think
better of it, like:
"he list is a mile long, but I can't say what's on it,
because I will be disqualified."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
    Hi Pam, Thanks for reading my 'story' 200 words goes like that when you are creating a story LOL Just a bit of fun Cheers
reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Aug-2018
    You are very welcome. Glad you had enough words🙂