Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Excellent poem! I think that I understand the poem you wrote. Everything is just for yourself and nobody else. I think it's humorous. I like it. Interesting.

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

This summer I have a very big job cleaning my cabin, clearing the woods, jacking the cabin etc etc. All these guys come to help me (damsel) but end up making a bigger job with shoddy work. In the old days, the jousting knights would get the women to tie a ribbon on their lances, not sure why. One guy actually told me that he was here to help me get my life together.... haha I have my life together more than 10 of them lined up, jeeez. anyway, it was a poke at all these ''white knights'' here in the kingdom of vermont and one damsel that has had enough. thanks for reading and reviewing, it was a little vague. Cheers, judester

reply by Raul1 on 10-Aug-2018

You're welcome