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My Lifetime

Nonets

9 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a wonderful series of nonets. Very creative going through the stages of life and now it's time for us to do what we want to enjoy ourselves. Bittersweet as we remember the days when our kids were growing up. Nice job with this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thank you very much
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Very nicely written. I can see why it is a favorite. It is lovely. This has great imagery which invites the reader to reflect upon their lifetime without restrictions of subject matter as you had an yet did a fine job. This also has revery within it. Well written.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Thanks for your very complimentary review , Li
Comment from bard owl
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Wow! 4 nonets taking the reader from childhood fantasies, through life's age related stresses to the time when the body and soul can relax. Excellent imagery in these nonets, something that a lot of nonet composers cannot accomplish. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Thought are very kind, thank you
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Help! I've fallen and I can' get up. I got dizzy while reading your excellent poem and fell down.

Imagined marriage from heaven

I think girls are born wanting to get married.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
    Yes, I don?t know why! I appreciate your fun compliments
Comment from AprilViolet
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Life doesnt always turn into the fairytale we hope it will be, but it looks like you've made peace with that and have had a good fulfilled life thus far. :) This poem made me smile! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Clever nonet triangles here telling a story and I enjoyed the read. I particularly liked the concluding nonet, poignant and honest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
    Namaste
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Nonet suite. Our dreams as girls are most of the time fantasy that never happens as we dream it. When we meet the right man who treat as well, there is nothing more we can dream about.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
    Appreciated
Comment from donette1914
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simply beautiful of a lifetime
it was a pleasure to read your work and thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I like the artwork
review by donette1914 Aug 10, 2018

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
    Good on ya
Comment from kiwijenny
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Very elegant shape and way to express life
I'm in the third shape...children have grown and have their own
It's a time of refreshing for sure
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
    Good on ya