God's Masterpiece
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a wonderful entry for the "God's paint set" contest. Your words are well chosen and the rhyme scheme is engaging. I also love the picture you chose to complement the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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This is a wonderful entry for the "God's paint set" contest. Your words are well chosen and the rhyme scheme is engaging. I also love the picture you chose to complement the poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for being so kind. This is actually an old post that I liked and wanted to share. Thank you for reading and for the 6 star rating...it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Nanny 6
Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect in this outstanding poem depicting God's masterpiece, painting Earth with such luscious colors... well done!!!! Good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect in this outstanding poem depicting God's masterpiece, painting Earth with such luscious colors... well done!!!! Good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, for this wonderful and the six stars! It really brightened my day. :)
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My pleasure 😇
Comment from tempeste
I loved you entry .. You did such a wonderful job in highlighting the love God has for us by describing all the beautiful colourful things he created for our pleasure.
Your words flow smoothly from start to finish ..
It wasn't an easy topic to put in words but reading your poem made it seems an easy task.
Vote : a big fat 6!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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I loved you entry .. You did such a wonderful job in highlighting the love God has for us by describing all the beautiful colourful things he created for our pleasure.
Your words flow smoothly from start to finish ..
It wasn't an easy topic to put in words but reading your poem made it seems an easy task.
Vote : a big fat 6!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much for this great review and the six stars..I really appreciate it.
Comment from poetwatch
Our father created everything, including us, with love. The perfect world in all shades of hue. Then the colors stared to run free and the landscape changed. It is still beautiful, but many do not see that beauty is to be saved not changed to suit our purpose. This is a wonderful poem an excellent entry for the God's Paint Set contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Our father created everything, including us, with love. The perfect world in all shades of hue. Then the colors stared to run free and the landscape changed. It is still beautiful, but many do not see that beauty is to be saved not changed to suit our purpose. This is a wonderful poem an excellent entry for the God's Paint Set contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments.Thanks so much for this kind review.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a beautiful expression of thanks for the stunning planet God created for us. I think it's really important to take the time to notice our surroundings. It's something most people take for granted.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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This is a beautiful expression of thanks for the stunning planet God created for us. I think it's really important to take the time to notice our surroundings. It's something most people take for granted.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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I agree! Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Skywatcher707
A lovely contest entry with flowing rhyme. You have captured the Creator's artistic talents in word. The picture chosen is very fitting. The repeated 's' sound in "The golden sands of deserts, shimmering in the sun" followed closely by "brush strokes", does not go unnoticed. The last line with the word 'to' used 3 times threw me off just a bit but I have no alternate suggestion. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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A lovely contest entry with flowing rhyme. You have captured the Creator's artistic talents in word. The picture chosen is very fitting. The repeated 's' sound in "The golden sands of deserts, shimmering in the sun" followed closely by "brush strokes", does not go unnoticed. The last line with the word 'to' used 3 times threw me off just a bit but I have no alternate suggestion. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Ben Colder
Right on writer. God blends His colors perfectly. Notice a peacock how adorn it struts on earth. Notice the Blue Ridge Mountains and how they shimmer in the setting sun. I love this poem. My blessings to you. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Right on writer. God blends His colors perfectly. Notice a peacock how adorn it struts on earth. Notice the Blue Ridge Mountains and how they shimmer in the setting sun. I love this poem. My blessings to you. You have my vote.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this kind review, I really appreciate your comments. :)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely, beautiful verse showcasing God's lovely Earth. Good job on the photography selection. It really adds pizzazz to your entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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This is a lovely, beautiful verse showcasing God's lovely Earth. Good job on the photography selection. It really adds pizzazz to your entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and review.
Comment from AprilViolet
Wonderful imagery and it flowed so nicely! Excellent entry into the contest. I felt you were painting the reader a picture and I could almost see it! Thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Wonderful imagery and it flowed so nicely! Excellent entry into the contest. I felt you were painting the reader a picture and I could almost see it! Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the six stars, I really appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Anon, well so far, this is one of the best works for this contest that I've seen. It's really lovely and I think we are so lucky to have such a wonderful creator with such a good eye for painting. I know of none better.
The imagery in this is gorgeous and the picture you've chosen suits the poem so well. Thanks for sharing this one and good luck, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Hello Anon, well so far, this is one of the best works for this contest that I've seen. It's really lovely and I think we are so lucky to have such a wonderful creator with such a good eye for painting. I know of none better.
The imagery in this is gorgeous and the picture you've chosen suits the poem so well. Thanks for sharing this one and good luck, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this kind review, I really appreciate it.
