Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This sixty-word sentence, A Prayer, meets the challenge of getting a message out within so many words and a single sentence, if I squint at the use of semicolon overuse. Happy day.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018

Thanks for the read, you are right it should have been a period.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, Harry, it is a scary thought of what is happening all over the world. Good job on your contest entry. You give readers much to think bout. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thanks much for your read and review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem for the writing prompt Live on Earth Better. You used very good words asking God for His help in this situation. I think God is the only hope we have for the world. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018

Thanks much for taking the time to read and comment.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Well, this seems a bit more than a single sentence, but I do like your entreaties to God, the EPA, and the government detailing what needs to be done.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018

Thanks much for taking the time to read and comment. Well, yes but 60 words, I thought a run-on sentence would be acceptable.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Problem is, what are they going to do about it? We all know it is happening, but what is the solution? Perhaps God is listening, but maybe he will blame us for it, a questioning write Harry, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018

Thanks Dolly, for taking the time to read and comment. We have to shake our politicians, get them out if they refuse to act.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Harry,
This is an excellent entry for the limited 60 word contest.
Your position is very well stated, but I think you're running into a wall
with the current administration.

truth seems to matter, [through] glaciers [though]

Hopefully the world will survive long enough to see a new group in power.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks for the read and the catch. I have edited. I cannot agree more with your take on the issue.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about problem of climate change, you worked to convince government, wrote letters and even marched, but of no avail, you pray to God to help the concerned see the truth; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks much for the read and the encouragement.