Green Eyed Monster
Our job to guard against his escape5 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
outstanding on jealousy
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read your work
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
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outstanding on jealousy
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read your work
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks much for your read and your review.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
The colors, the vibrancy of your images and a visceral understanding of jealousy make this poem deeply rich with complexity and lush passionate green eyed creatures!
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The colors, the vibrancy of your images and a visceral understanding of jealousy make this poem deeply rich with complexity and lush passionate green eyed creatures!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks much for your read and your review.
Comment from jenintorre
You have described jealousy very well in this poem. It is not a pretty trait. I love your green eyed monster illustration, very well chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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You have described jealousy very well in this poem. It is not a pretty trait. I love your green eyed monster illustration, very well chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks much for your read and your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such an intriguing and very reflective piece on a sometimes uncomfortable and even misunderstood subject -- really enjoyed your ruminations! :) :) They are very well organized and wonderfully stated...you've even developed a comfortable rhythm to them even within the chosen format -- great job!
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Such an intriguing and very reflective piece on a sometimes uncomfortable and even misunderstood subject -- really enjoyed your ruminations! :) :) They are very well organized and wonderfully stated...you've even developed a comfortable rhythm to them even within the chosen format -- great job!
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for the read, review and encouraging words.
Comment from Leslie Schweitzer
Very nice descriptive expression of how destructive and evil jealousy can be, and how hurtful to ourselves unless we try to contain it. It can make us monsters, and mindlessly hurtful when it's unleashed and directed toward another.
The poem references fear as a motivator of jealousy, and I think that is often overlooked, but extremely important. Taming the monster requires insight, as the poem suggests.
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Very nice descriptive expression of how destructive and evil jealousy can be, and how hurtful to ourselves unless we try to contain it. It can make us monsters, and mindlessly hurtful when it's unleashed and directed toward another.
The poem references fear as a motivator of jealousy, and I think that is often overlooked, but extremely important. Taming the monster requires insight, as the poem suggests.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the read.
