Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Needs Improvement

This speaks a challenge thrown, only then your coworker started contributing the work at his level of proficiency, but this work does not meet the writing prompt requirement fully; Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

I think it does meet the requirements. My characters did make a better world, for themselves. I'm not sure what you mean by' a challenge thrown.' Thanks for the great review, Al.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Okay that was hilarious -- and how many times have so many of us wished to say something like that!! Love your humorous twist on the probable intent of the contest -- gave a much needed smile this morning! :) ;)

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

Thank you for the great review, YMR. Yeah, I was in one of those moods, lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have a great weekend.

Ron

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Spot on the forty words allowed and i would imagine the world would be a better place with your co-worker contributing properly, but did the coworker appreciate the improvement I wonder?

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

Haha, I doubt he did. Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. Have a great weekend.

Ron