Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

LOL. Good question. (Do you need a comma after genius?
Good use of alliteration with 'wealthy',' wore' and 'would'.
Also Starkist and seafood. Very clever.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018

I actually moved the comma to after the word lobster to identify the appositive. Thanks.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Did Tony Starkist get his wealth from tuna? Probably, since he's a genius, he would be an Avenger. But I'm not quite sure for whom he would be avenging. Fun poem, Bill.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute prank poem you have penned about Tony Starkist. You used very cute words and very good imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 08-Aug-2018

you are so welcome!

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

The lobster would be seafood in a can. Good satire bite with a touch of humor thrown in for good measure. An enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thanks, Brett

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

A cute picture. If you were an Avenger, it's a pretty good bet no one would want to eat you. I thought lobsters were already pretty well armored. Why all the commas in the second line? I don't think you need them all. Humorous in a rather dark way. judi

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

I must have been sniffing glue when I punctuated this. I lost the comma after lobster and exchanged the comma splice with a semicolon. Thanks.

reply by judiverse on 06-Aug-2018

You're welcome. Yes, sniffing glue can be hazardous to your punctuation. judi

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Bill. Maybe if lobsters had iron shells, we would not eat them. Why would we if we could not penetrate their shells? Hard to see a wealthy person being an avenger. But maybe if he was a lobster....Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018

Thanks, Pam

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, Bill, Tony would never had been caught. And he would have easily gotten rid of those after him. good job on your lobster story. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018

Thanks, Jan

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

It took some imagination to come up with this one, Bill. Interesting reference between wore and iron suit--the avenger and seafood in a can. Clever. That's quite an image. I guess that's to crack open the shell. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

Thanks, Marilyn, for giving this a look.

reply by BeasPeas on 03-Aug-2018

I used to love lobster before I became vegetarian lots of years ago. The image caught my eye and, of course, I had to read your clever poem.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, My guess is that even Tony Stark would see this pranka as a ton of fun, and then Iron Man would be on the hunt.

Overall a fine job with great satiric bite.

Enjoyed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

HAHA!!! Well I don't know!!!... wait a minute..isn't Tony a shark??? let's make him an Avenger! that's sounds way cooler huh/ heheh Nice one! enjoyed :-)

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

I was thinking that Tony Stark was Ironman and Starkist canned tuna so?-

reply by Susanjohn on 06-Aug-2018

lol now im confused