A Sunrise to Remember*
Front porch meditations at dawn18 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
A perfect moment inspired expressed eloquently. The imagery you infused in these few words is magical. Your front porch must have the most awe inspiring sunrises to inspire this magnificent write.
Simply brilliant.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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A perfect moment inspired expressed eloquently. The imagery you infused in these few words is magical. Your front porch must have the most awe inspiring sunrises to inspire this magnificent write.
Simply brilliant.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Wow! Thank you so very much for your review, Eugene, and a very special thanx for those wonderful stars - they were a wonderful start to my day!! :) I always am so appreciative for folks truly reading and analyzing my work; it really does mean much to the author that folks see more than just the words on a page since, in many cases, that's what poetry is! :) :) :) Enough of my ramblings, though -- thank you and I wish you a wonderful remainder of the week with lots of sunshine and passing clouds to stimulate your imagination!! :) :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a metaphoric scale of romantic behaviour sentiment of making sexual appeal in the dewy morning for ecstatic enjoyment freely before the sunrise in grace of Nature; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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This speaks a metaphoric scale of romantic behaviour sentiment of making sexual appeal in the dewy morning for ecstatic enjoyment freely before the sunrise in grace of Nature; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Doc!!!! You are the only one that really got where I was going with this one!! Thanx for the review and have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from Therese103
This is a very nice, refreshing poem! I particularly like the line about the ''sweet morning dew''. The only thing I wanted to ask is where the romance comes in? I probably am missing something, but it seems to be more a nature poem than a romance poem....just my personal opinion, and I'd be happy to have that refuted:-) I wish you well in the contest! Blessings
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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This is a very nice, refreshing poem! I particularly like the line about the ''sweet morning dew''. The only thing I wanted to ask is where the romance comes in? I probably am missing something, but it seems to be more a nature poem than a romance poem....just my personal opinion, and I'd be happy to have that refuted:-) I wish you well in the contest! Blessings
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, Therese, - always appreciate folks taking time to review my work! :) This is more for the older generation, I suppose, but I will say that it will all become clear if you do a quick investigation into the double entendre contained in the first line...gives the whole poem a different 'feel'. ;) wink, wink ;) Have a wonderful week ahead, ma'am! :) :)
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ah! Thank you for clarifying!!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Meditation is the first word which came to mind after reading this poem. Your photograph is lush and paired beautifully with the story. Much hope in these words.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Meditation is the first word which came to mind after reading this poem. Your photograph is lush and paired beautifully with the story. Much hope in these words.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, Shauna, - always appreciate folks taking time to review my work! :) And (not that it really matters...) I think I'm feeling pretty old having to point this out (but c'est la vie, oui? lol), but there is a hidden message in here if you do a quick investigation into the double entendre contained in the first line...gives the whole poem a different 'feel'. ;) wink, wink ;) Blessings for a wonderful week ahead, ma'am! :) :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautifully pictured for this poem may they bloom to their heart's content. will make a beautiful display put in a vase for all to enjoy. I hope the scythe is not going to kill them in the end.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Beautifully pictured for this poem may they bloom to their heart's content. will make a beautiful display put in a vase for all to enjoy. I hope the scythe is not going to kill them in the end.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, country ranch, - always appreciate folks taking time to review my work! :) And (not that it really matters...) I think I'm feeling pretty old having to point this out (but c'est la vie, oui? lol), but there is a hidden message in here if you do a quick investigation into the double entendre contained in the first line...gives the whole poem a different 'feel'. ;) wink, wink ;) Blessings for a wonderful week ahead, ma'am! :) :)
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I hope the scythe wasn't the end of the beauties
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I don't understand. Why the sexual content warning??? After reading your poem, I was not aroused. This is an excellent contest entry. According to my physic, departed grandma, you will win and split the money with me. I'll email you my mailing address.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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I don't understand. Why the sexual content warning??? After reading your poem, I was not aroused. This is an excellent contest entry. According to my physic, departed grandma, you will win and split the money with me. I'll email you my mailing address.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, Thomas, and I like your grandma's foresight especially since its 'heaven sent'! ;) :) In fact she should be able to answer your question for if you read the first line to her.....it is a bit of an 'older' reference. ;) wink, wink ;) Have a wonderful week ahead, sir! Cheers! :) :)
Comment from donette1914
what a stunning photo and this outstanding
I hope for the best in the contest
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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what a stunning photo and this outstanding
I hope for the best in the contest
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, Donette, - always appreciate folks taking time to review my work! :) And (not that it really matters...) I think I'm feeling pretty old having to point this out (but c'est la vie, oui? lol), but there is a hidden message in here if you do a quick investigation into the double entendre contained in the first line...gives the whole poem a different 'feel'. ;) wink, wink ;) Blessings for a wonderful week ahead, ma'am! :) :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Inspiring and inspired poetry! Invites the reader to "be still" and ponder the wonder displayed in a flower, a sunrise, a new day....
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Inspiring and inspired poetry! Invites the reader to "be still" and ponder the wonder displayed in a flower, a sunrise, a new day....
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanx for your review, Donka, - always appreciate folks taking time to review my work! :) And I think I'm feeling pretty old having to point this out (but c'est la vie, oui?), but there is a hidden message in here if you do a quick investigation into the double entendre contained in the first line...gives the whole poem a different 'feel'. ;) wink, wink ;) Blessings for a wonderful week ahead, ma'am! :) :)
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au plaisir. What a surprise to find a French speaking poet! First line? Will have a look...
