God Omnipotent Deeds
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "In God We Trust "God Omnipotent Omniscient Omnipresent Does Deeds
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Comment from giraffmang
We're losing human values patience and quality perseverance - this is very jerky, there should probably be more punctuation here and possibly should have the inclusion of the after losing and of after values to give a smoother read.
It's a nice thought but it isn't going to happen. Since time began it's been this way, as sad as that may be.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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We're losing human values patience and quality perseverance - this is very jerky, there should probably be more punctuation here and possibly should have the inclusion of the after losing and of after values to give a smoother read.
It's a nice thought but it isn't going to happen. Since time began it's been this way, as sad as that may be.
All the best
GMG
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It has been reported in England that there is less crime on the streets and more crime on the internet these days, but I understand your sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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It has been reported in England that there is less crime on the streets and more crime on the internet these days, but I understand your sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the contest entry. I like how you stated what needed to be changes then stated how doing that would benefit all. I like the words in red. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You did a good job with the contest entry. I like how you stated what needed to be changes then stated how doing that would benefit all. I like the words in red. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this right review I appreciate.
Comment from Aussie
My sentiments exactly! The World has gone to pot. People have turned their backs on god, what they can't see, they don't believe. There are miracles every day, too blind or too greedy and self-centred to see. For those who love the Lord, his grace surrounds us. From sunrise to sunset we are His. Thank you
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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My sentiments exactly! The World has gone to pot. People have turned their backs on god, what they can't see, they don't believe. There are miracles every day, too blind or too greedy and self-centred to see. For those who love the Lord, his grace surrounds us. From sunrise to sunset we are His. Thank you
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this righteous review I appreciate.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
My oh my...you really took this prompt and ran with it. There is great soul and truth in these forty words. No pretense just simple humanity. Such a fine piece of work.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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My oh my...you really took this prompt and ran with it. There is great soul and truth in these forty words. No pretense just simple humanity. Such a fine piece of work.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from tempeste
Yesterday I read the entries but I don't remember reading yours . So when I went to the booth I already had in mind who I was going to vote ..in my carelessness I didn't see your entry .
I loved your presentation ...not a word wasted ..every single one gives weight to the overall message you wanted to convey .
I couldn't give less than 6 .
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Yesterday I read the entries but I don't remember reading yours . So when I went to the booth I already had in mind who I was going to vote ..in my carelessness I didn't see your entry .
I loved your presentation ...not a word wasted ..every single one gives weight to the overall message you wanted to convey .
I couldn't give less than 6 .
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this awesome review I appreciate.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is beautifully said! You have met the requirements of including values, God, humanity, and civilization. I also believe I counted 40 words, too. Your writing shares the way in which we can make a better world. Inspiring!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is beautifully said! You have met the requirements of including values, God, humanity, and civilization. I also believe I counted 40 words, too. Your writing shares the way in which we can make a better world. Inspiring!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Thank you for posting the required words in red font, Alcreator Litt Dear. That makes it so much easier to determine whether or not they were all used.
I also agree with the sentence you wrote.
If the things you mentioned were put into motion on a regular basis the world would be a nicer and much safer place in which to live.
~Dean
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for posting the required words in red font, Alcreator Litt Dear. That makes it so much easier to determine whether or not they were all used.
I also agree with the sentence you wrote.
If the things you mentioned were put into motion on a regular basis the world would be a nicer and much safer place in which to live.
~Dean
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
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U R welcome. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those forty words should be put on a plaque for all to see and, hopefully, learn from. It's surely not that hard a thing to do? But, considering our history, and the history of other countries, we are a long way from getting to that point. So sad. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Those forty words should be put on a plaque for all to see and, hopefully, learn from. It's surely not that hard a thing to do? But, considering our history, and the history of other countries, we are a long way from getting to that point. So sad. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from Artasylum
Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR: So much of life is spent remembering and imaging and we all forget to just be. You just reminded me and pulled me back to earth from who know where. yours, diana
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Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR: So much of life is spent remembering and imaging and we all forget to just be. You just reminded me and pulled me back to earth from who know where. yours, diana
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
