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Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Non-Fiction meeting the desired norms, having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting the theme within the prescribed limits.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Non-Fiction meeting the desired norms, having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting the theme within the prescribed limits.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Words as true today as when you originally wrote them two years ago - possibly more so. I'm glad I read the author's notes before I started the review. I was fixing to comment that the piece needed to be divided into more manageable sentences until I saw it was a 40 word sentence contest. Interesting concept and great execution.
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Words as true today as when you originally wrote them two years ago - possibly more so. I'm glad I read the author's notes before I started the review. I was fixing to comment that the piece needed to be divided into more manageable sentences until I saw it was a 40 word sentence contest. Interesting concept and great execution.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
It' so good that you posted your All Best poem and re-posted. You had a good message in 2O18 and Good for you to
repeat the Powerful Message for the what seems to me the present year 2000, is lacking God, values, and loving your neighbor as, you love yourself.
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
It' so good that you posted your All Best poem and re-posted. You had a good message in 2O18 and Good for you to
repeat the Powerful Message for the what seems to me the present year 2000, is lacking God, values, and loving your neighbor as, you love yourself.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
Comment from Sumpta
God is Love, in him alone we put our trust. We need to make the world a better place, this can be possible by doing things right and trying to spread love among one another. Well done writer.
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God is Love, in him alone we put our trust. We need to make the world a better place, this can be possible by doing things right and trying to spread love among one another. Well done writer.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
Comment from Loretta Albritton Coleman
For such a time as this we needed this writing to show up again; true to life indeed! I agree completely with how you unpacked the forty words of wisdom. Loretta
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For such a time as this we needed this writing to show up again; true to life indeed! I agree completely with how you unpacked the forty words of wisdom. Loretta
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
I agree with everything you have said here. I would just add one more thing that we need to do as a Nation: Grow Up! Everyone can't be first, everyone can't be the richest, and everyone can't be the most important. I don't know if we'll ever get over our childish behaviors and expectations.
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I agree with everything you have said here. I would just add one more thing that we need to do as a Nation: Grow Up! Everyone can't be first, everyone can't be the richest, and everyone can't be the most important. I don't know if we'll ever get over our childish behaviors and expectations.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I find very clever the way you emphasis of our sacred values: God - Humanity - Civilization. What is between the holy trinity it's the garbage that we inherit and we carry over generation after generation.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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I find very clever the way you emphasis of our sacred values: God - Humanity - Civilization. What is between the holy trinity it's the garbage that we inherit and we carry over generation after generation.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
Well written, Alcreator! This is a really long sentence, but with commas and other punctuation, it reads pretty good. Maybe place a comma following values and patience. The commas help for pause when reading.
Drew
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Well written, Alcreator! This is a really long sentence, but with commas and other punctuation, it reads pretty good. Maybe place a comma following values and patience. The commas help for pause when reading.
Drew
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from richie b
Alcreator,
Your message in 2018 needs to be heeded as much
if not more in2020. Your writing covered all the essentials
of moral and human survival.
Meaningful living is an excellent term to make a life
honorable to God and to serve our brothers and sisters.
Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Richie b
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Alcreator,
Your message in 2018 needs to be heeded as much
if not more in2020. Your writing covered all the essentials
of moral and human survival.
Meaningful living is an excellent term to make a life
honorable to God and to serve our brothers and sisters.
Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Richie b
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from Shirley McLain
Every word you wrote is true, now and in 2018. You did a great job and I can see why you have All Time Best status. I didn't see any mistakes in your fourty words. Have a great day. Shirley
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Every word you wrote is true, now and in 2018. You did a great job and I can see why you have All Time Best status. I didn't see any mistakes in your fourty words. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020