Soully As One
In that instant, you just know...15 total reviews
Comment from hari anand
Wow this is truly magical when exhalation binds two souls. Your picture complements your poetry.. Congratulations for winning this one... Well deserved.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Wow this is truly magical when exhalation binds two souls. Your picture complements your poetry.. Congratulations for winning this one... Well deserved.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Wow - again for those stars - never cease to put a smile on my face! Thank you very much for your review, hargunanand - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those heart-felt comments (& congrats!) and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
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Thank you for wishing me a fantastic week... Im feeeling good already
Comment from donette1914
wow simply brilliant!!! and congratulations!!
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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wow simply brilliant!!! and congratulations!!
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review, Donette, and may you have a wonderful week ahead filled with sunshine! :) :)
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Y J Roger, I really like this 2-4-4-12 writing prompt. It certainly is magic when the universe aligns and brings two souls together to love and last and to be as one for eternity. Very well written. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Y J Roger, I really like this 2-4-4-12 writing prompt. It certainly is magic when the universe aligns and brings two souls together to love and last and to be as one for eternity. Very well written. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for your review, DD - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
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YMR, with such a wonderful response I think I am going to have to pop in again for a look see and read : -) ~DD
Comment from Dean Kuch
Breathing in each other's essence.
What an interesting concept, Anonymous Poet.
The accompanying artwork you've chosen is the perfect compliment to the words you've used.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Breathing in each other's essence.
What an interesting concept, Anonymous Poet.
The accompanying artwork you've chosen is the perfect compliment to the words you've used.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your review, Dean - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Can't say that I've ever been in the situation where it actually happened to me, but I let my poet heart speak on this one! :) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars and may the remainder of your week be a mixture of warm sand between your toes and finger-painting recollections with which to enjoy it! :) :) :)
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I like your response to this writing prompt/contest. This has a very romantic undertone and is well-written. I like your chose title, "soulfully as one." I think that sums up what most hope to aspire to find. Good luck in the contest. You have a solid entry.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I like your response to this writing prompt/contest. This has a very romantic undertone and is well-written. I like your chose title, "soulfully as one." I think that sums up what most hope to aspire to find. Good luck in the contest. You have a solid entry.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your review, Cindy - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars, ma'am, and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so lovely. I have been working on something for the 5-7-5 'address a lover contest.' This is similar to, but so much better than, thoughts that have been running through my mind. How romantic can you get? That moment when lovers meet is magical. You ought to rework it and enter the contest that I am working on. It pays real money, and you clearly have a romantic heart.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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This is so lovely. I have been working on something for the 5-7-5 'address a lover contest.' This is similar to, but so much better than, thoughts that have been running through my mind. How romantic can you get? That moment when lovers meet is magical. You ought to rework it and enter the contest that I am working on. It pays real money, and you clearly have a romantic heart.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Wow - would love to hear more about the contest, Debbie!! And thank you very much for your review - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Can't say that I've ever been in the situation where it actually happened to me, per se, but I let my poet heart speak on this one! :) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars, ma'am, and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
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Here is the writing prompt with a prize at $100, I think. You should enter all the romantic ones.
Comment from victor 66
Yes, I've had this feeling that I was complete with another person to the point that If I could wish and it would come true, that I could be with anyone else and any place else, I would have chosen to be with this one person in the place where we were. But I don't think this feeling lasts forever, at least it didn't for me. But, I'll never forget that I did have this feeling once and maybe that's enough. Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Yes, I've had this feeling that I was complete with another person to the point that If I could wish and it would come true, that I could be with anyone else and any place else, I would have chosen to be with this one person in the place where we were. But I don't think this feeling lasts forever, at least it didn't for me. But, I'll never forget that I did have this feeling once and maybe that's enough. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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You are so right, Victor, the ideal is in the meeting -- those first moments when you've found that special someone with whom to spend the rest of your life -- because your bonded to that person, doesn't mean it'll be wine and roses from that point forward (actually more like beer and daisies a lot of the time!) -- but the bonding? Yep, that's pretty good there for a while, yeah?! :) :) We hold onto it for those times when there doesn't seem to be any magic anywhere, and it actually helps us to write poems like this! :) :) Thank you very much for your review - so appreciative that you took the time to read my work! :) ;) :) Thanx again for those awesome stars, sir, and I wish for you a remainder of the week filled with cool breezes and night time star gazing!! :) :)
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Well, that was one of the best replies I've ever received! You are most welcome, and thank you.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a wonderful expression of the soulmate kind of love. It doesn't come along often, but when it does it's unmistakable.
Very well written. Best of luck in the contest.
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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This is a wonderful expression of the soulmate kind of love. It doesn't come along often, but when it does it's unmistakable.
Very well written. Best of luck in the contest.
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your review, Lynnette - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Can't say that I've ever been in the situation where it actually happened to me, but I let my poet heart speak on this one! :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this entry and think you have done an outstanding job conveying a deep message of awareness. This is definitely a good contender for the 2-4-4-12 prompt and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I love this entry and think you have done an outstanding job conveying a deep message of awareness. This is definitely a good contender for the 2-4-4-12 prompt and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your review, ma'am - so appreciative that you took the time to read and analyze my work! :) ;) :) Because it was such an unusual style, I simply had to give it a try...didn't decide to do the lettering that way until I took one look at the preview before posting and knew I had to do something to it to make it more aesthetically pleasing (at least to these OCD/mathematical eyes!) :) :) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! :) :) :)
Comment from L E Scott
Very beautiful sentiment. It almost melts my cold heart. I think this is the romantic ideal but perhaps not exactly how it always pans out.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Very beautiful sentiment. It almost melts my cold heart. I think this is the romantic ideal but perhaps not exactly how it always pans out.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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The ideal is in the meeting, L E -- those first moments when you've found that special someone with whom to spend the rest of your life -- because your bonded to that person, doesn't mean it'll be wine and roses from that point forward (actually more like beer and daisies a lot of the time!) -- but the bonding? Yeah, that's pretty good in the beginning! :) :) I hope your heart can find some melting soon -- gotta find it before winter arrives! :) :) Thank you very much for your review - so appreciative that you took the time to read my work (and that it at least got a start on the melting!)! :) ;) :) Thanx again for those wonderful stars, L E, and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with your choice of any fantastical beasts and the excitement they bring to your world (if you let them!)! Perhaps there's a friendly dragon who'll warm your toes for a start!:) :) :)
