Comment from krys123

Excellent

Okay!
cheers, Bill;
> He blown my stitches apart in ways that I don't even know what I can find them.
> This writing is quite melodic especially in a formatted piece that has undertones of a limerick. And is well done, at that.
>I like the fact that I am believing in these nicknames which become real and therefore makes the poem come to fruition and even becomes funnier.
> Thanks for sharing my friend especially posting and take care and have a good one especially where you can find it. Chuckle!
Alx

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018

Thanks. Alex, for the nice review. Bill

reply by krys123 on 01-Aug-2018

You're very welcome my friend and take care.
Alx

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

You've got some clever rhymes in this play on words, but maybe I'm not smart enough to get it. Toe wasn't his...Aunt Zeller? I'm sure you've got a good word play in here, because you usually do; I'm just not quite sure what it is.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018

Thanks, Brenda

reply by brenda faye curtis on 03-Aug-2018

You're welcome, Bill.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Very cute and funny with a great ending line. Another unusual little creature for you to pay homage too with your clever and original poems.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Wait what? Zeller who?? Who's zellar? What is going on with those ants??? Though a elfin ant farm sounds kinda cool huh?... lol what kinda syrup are you drinking?? hehehe

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018

Thanks, Susan, for getting into this. Bill

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

He he he, a very clever right with a play on some great descriptive and fun sounding words here, I loved your unique language that only comes from your pen Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018

Thanks, Dolly, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Another humorous-sounding one! Do your grand kids get to read your works? I like the creative playful names and the fun internal rhymes and the tongue-twister sounds.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks, lyenochka, for checking this out. I?ve two pairs of grandkids. I don?t really hav3 anything they?d like to read.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Just love your children's poem Bil, this cleverly cratfed work, speaks of fascinating creatures that live on plants. Personally when I was young, I often dreamt of living in a tree house, beautifully written and imaginitvely scribed and rhymed poem, well done, blessjngs, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks, Roy

reply by royowen on 30-Jul-2018

Welcome Bill

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ants do love their peonies, don't they? They go together like, erm ... well you know.

This is terrific and so unique and such a hoot, Bill. Plus you always get a good laugh from me, so keep them coming.

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks,Gloria

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, Oh you do make me laugh. You make up all these wonderful characters from I don't know where, and yet they all make a heck of a lot of sense. Wonderful little poem you've written here. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Very clever and creative and fun. I enjoyed the whimsy in this delightful little story.
Great picture and presentation to complete the tale.

Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks, Janet