God's Art
All his brushes are the same-Acrostic21 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
I like the fact you took the contest rules, ran with them and came up with an Acrostic poem to offer up and a very good one at that. The visuals of God touching the canvas with His brushes and creating and touching up our world were great. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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I like the fact you took the contest rules, ran with them and came up with an Acrostic poem to offer up and a very good one at that. The visuals of God touching the canvas with His brushes and creating and touching up our world were great. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've painted a beautiful picture with your poem about God's art. I like the clever wording that you've incorporated into this well written and well constructed work. I like this! You should do well in the contest. Well done!
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You've painted a beautiful picture with your poem about God's art. I like the clever wording that you've incorporated into this well written and well constructed work. I like this! You should do well in the contest. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative, descriptive
and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of
this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments both the
theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative, descriptive
and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of
this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments both the
theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written, author, and what a neat idea to make your contest entry an acrostic as well.
Your imagery is terrific and your mono rhymes per each stanza is another creative touch.
Best wishes to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Very nicely written, author, and what a neat idea to make your contest entry an acrostic as well.
Your imagery is terrific and your mono rhymes per each stanza is another creative touch.
Best wishes to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Thank y four this very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about the greatest artist of all. The creator of the most beautiful life portraits we can see daily in nature. Great monorhyme in each stanza.
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the greatest artist of all. The creator of the most beautiful life portraits we can see daily in nature. Great monorhyme in each stanza.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your very encouraging reciew****kahpot
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Admirable. Inspiring words that fit perfectly into the poem's title. Rhyme and rhythm make a fluent, interesting read. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Admirable. Inspiring words that fit perfectly into the poem's title. Rhyme and rhythm make a fluent, interesting read. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Annika Fiercely
Nice! Paints a very good metaphor, and I like that you chose the acrostic - you dealt with the topic really creatively and made a very enjoyable poem.
My critique would be that at some points the metaphor seems a little strained or confusing . . . it wasn't immediately obvious to me what it means 'when easels lean' . . . after a while I concluded that it means that our structure is faulted so our painting ends up faulted as well. I think it could be more clear, but I also might just be being stupid, so if you think it's clear or day or, you know, that you wanted me to think about it, then you're probably write.
Best wishes!
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Nice! Paints a very good metaphor, and I like that you chose the acrostic - you dealt with the topic really creatively and made a very enjoyable poem.
My critique would be that at some points the metaphor seems a little strained or confusing . . . it wasn't immediately obvious to me what it means 'when easels lean' . . . after a while I concluded that it means that our structure is faulted so our painting ends up faulted as well. I think it could be more clear, but I also might just be being stupid, so if you think it's clear or day or, you know, that you wanted me to think about it, then you're probably write.
Best wishes!
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Easels are what hold the painting while they are being painted and yes this is structure, thank you for the 4 srtar review much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Every time I see a beautiful aspect of nature I think and feel what you have expressed in this poem. There is much truth to what you have written. Beautiful.
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Every time I see a beautiful aspect of nature I think and feel what you have expressed in this poem. There is much truth to what you have written. Beautiful.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic and your poem fulfills the brief and you painted a colourful picture here of God's special paint brush at work in our world, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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A fine acrostic and your poem fulfills the brief and you painted a colourful picture here of God's special paint brush at work in our world, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Lady Jane
First off, Cleo85 is my favorite artist on FanArt. Love her. Excellent picture choice for this rhyming Acrostic. What a beautifully penned tribute to God's masterpiece here on earth. The rhyme is strong and steady. The flow is nicely sustained throughout the piece. My only suggestion is to just remove the comma that's standing by itself. It's not needed and detracts from the overall feel of the write. Your acrostic will stand nicely without it :) Well done with this contest entry. You've conveyed God's majesty and beautification of earth in an inspiring way. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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First off, Cleo85 is my favorite artist on FanArt. Love her. Excellent picture choice for this rhyming Acrostic. What a beautifully penned tribute to God's masterpiece here on earth. The rhyme is strong and steady. The flow is nicely sustained throughout the piece. My only suggestion is to just remove the comma that's standing by itself. It's not needed and detracts from the overall feel of the write. Your acrostic will stand nicely without it :) Well done with this contest entry. You've conveyed God's majesty and beautification of earth in an inspiring way. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you and it is removed
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awesome entry here.
