God's Art
All his brushes are the same-Acrostic21 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Beautiful paint set and witness to the world.
If you are naming this acrostic - the title should
be the same as your words below - Gods Paint Set.
This is what I was taught. God does smile at His
Masterpieces - you and I. God bless. Great entry.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Beautiful paint set and witness to the world.
If you are naming this acrostic - the title should
be the same as your words below - Gods Paint Set.
This is what I was taught. God does smile at His
Masterpieces - you and I. God bless. Great entry.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much and I shall remember that for my nest attempt, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very cleverly written. Your imagery is very clear. My favorite line which makes this a universal poem is this: "Ingenious strokes brushed worldwide" To acknowledge indiginious people is quite a tribute as their vision and being esteemed for their gifts and values is quickly fading. They were the first to recognize the beauty around them and have done their best to preserve them. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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This is very cleverly written. Your imagery is very clear. My favorite line which makes this a universal poem is this: "Ingenious strokes brushed worldwide" To acknowledge indiginious people is quite a tribute as their vision and being esteemed for their gifts and values is quickly fading. They were the first to recognize the beauty around them and have done their best to preserve them. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for this very understanding and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Skywatcher707
Great job using rhyme in an acrostic! "Those brushes tarred with equal pride" made seemed to be a conundrum as my mind processed the meaning of 'tarred' having a negative connotation but 'pride' so positive. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Great job using rhyme in an acrostic! "Those brushes tarred with equal pride" made seemed to be a conundrum as my mind processed the meaning of 'tarred' having a negative connotation but 'pride' so positive. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth. And He saw that His art was good. So I see it as good too. See GENESIS chapter one. In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God. "ALL THINGS;" were made through Him, and without Him nothing was made that was made. See JOHN chapter one.
I know that people like you and I are an essential part of God's art. Why? See the last line of your last stanza. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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HELLO POET: In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth. And He saw that His art was good. So I see it as good too. See GENESIS chapter one. In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God. "ALL THINGS;" were made through Him, and without Him nothing was made that was made. See JOHN chapter one.
I know that people like you and I are an essential part of God's art. Why? See the last line of your last stanza. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this very informative review I will check out your suggestions
Comment from mermaids
Your acrostic form captures God as the divine artist. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words that adds to the strength of the poem. I like the line "nourished with colors side by side", it reminds me of nature and all the colors in her.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Your acrostic form captures God as the divine artist. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words that adds to the strength of the poem. I like the line "nourished with colors side by side", it reminds me of nature and all the colors in her.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much
Comment from Artasylum
What a good entry for the God's Pain Set entry... This is perfectly penned and perfectly plucked words... Great, good luck with this in the contest... Thanks so much yours, diana
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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What a good entry for the God's Pain Set entry... This is perfectly penned and perfectly plucked words... Great, good luck with this in the contest... Thanks so much yours, diana
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you
Comment from kiwijenny
God has painted every scene
Offered his set for mankind's dream
Demanding nothing when easels lean
Strengthening structure for a world he's seen
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Picturing a canvas for us to abide
Absorbing the spill we cannot hide.....I especially love absorbing the spill we cannot hide
I love that you used an acrostic for this contest entry...smart
God bless
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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God has painted every scene
Offered his set for mankind's dream
Demanding nothing when easels lean
Strengthening structure for a world he's seen
****
Picturing a canvas for us to abide
Absorbing the spill we cannot hide.....I especially love absorbing the spill we cannot hide
I love that you used an acrostic for this contest entry...smart
God bless
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you most appreciated
Comment from Air Spirit
A very clever, moving and poignant Acrostic Poem on God's Paint Set --- you artfully constructed the poem, with forethought, precision and fruition... it contains a lovely message, that although God is the Master Artist, he provides us with everything we need to pain the picture of our lives: tools, talent and motivation... A great contest entry!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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A very clever, moving and poignant Acrostic Poem on God's Paint Set --- you artfully constructed the poem, with forethought, precision and fruition... it contains a lovely message, that although God is the Master Artist, he provides us with everything we need to pain the picture of our lives: tools, talent and motivation... A great contest entry!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Exactly and Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-A well written acrostic
with good imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you use the theme of
God's paint set as the premise of your poem.
-The second verse develops the theme
with good, specific examples.
-Good conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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-Very nice artwork.
-A well written acrostic
with good imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you use the theme of
God's paint set as the premise of your poem.
-The second verse develops the theme
with good, specific examples.
-Good conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very well written poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm. I really enjoyed reading it.I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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This is a very well written poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm. I really enjoyed reading it.I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you
