The Adrenaline Rush of Danger
The THRILL of the hunt!9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Such bravery. You have a tongue-in-cheek humor about this but I an getting the sarcasm that there actually is a parallel to how some hunters (newly defined) unfairly hunt defenseless animals even hin their sleep. At the risk of becoming political and enraged, I will stop here leaving the reader to ralize the serious impact of this poem. I'm voting for you.
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Such bravery. You have a tongue-in-cheek humor about this but I an getting the sarcasm that there actually is a parallel to how some hunters (newly defined) unfairly hunt defenseless animals even hin their sleep. At the risk of becoming political and enraged, I will stop here leaving the reader to ralize the serious impact of this poem. I'm voting for you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-five-three poem, Adrenaline Rush of Danger, uses the proper syllable formatting and makes a compelling argument for hunting with an Abrams tank. You will have to lick the round for meat, or expect a lot of sewing to get a mount out of it.
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This three-five-three poem, Adrenaline Rush of Danger, uses the proper syllable formatting and makes a compelling argument for hunting with an Abrams tank. You will have to lick the round for meat, or expect a lot of sewing to get a mount out of it.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
Comment from Henry King
The vision is excellent for the 3 5 3 Poetic contest. I have been both hunter and prey. If it were right here and now, I could blame my lack of bladder control on being bitten by Agent Orange and not being scared.
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The vision is excellent for the 3 5 3 Poetic contest. I have been both hunter and prey. If it were right here and now, I could blame my lack of bladder control on being bitten by Agent Orange and not being scared.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
LOL You are at a bit of an advantage in that tank. Poor lion. I enjoyed your 3-5-3 poem for the writing prompt. I think the real warriors would use something a little more natural than a tank. I found your poem fun and entertaining, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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LOL You are at a bit of an advantage in that tank. Poor lion. I enjoyed your 3-5-3 poem for the writing prompt. I think the real warriors would use something a little more natural than a tank. I found your poem fun and entertaining, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from Lady Jane
Ok, I have to give it to you. Impressive images and well played presentation make this an awesome entry. The words, the images, the structure, all well constructed. Good luck in the contest with this short write. Nothing I can recommend needs revision or editing.
Janelle
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Ok, I have to give it to you. Impressive images and well played presentation make this an awesome entry. The words, the images, the structure, all well constructed. Good luck in the contest with this short write. Nothing I can recommend needs revision or editing.
Janelle
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Poachers have been known to engage in what we "normal" hunters like to call "overkill".
They use high-powered weapons such as Barret .50 cal rifles that'll blow clean through a concrete wall at 800 yards.
Totally unnecessary.
And now they're using tanks?
Oh...woe are we...
~Dean
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Poachers have been known to engage in what we "normal" hunters like to call "overkill".
They use high-powered weapons such as Barret .50 cal rifles that'll blow clean through a concrete wall at 800 yards.
Totally unnecessary.
And now they're using tanks?
Oh...woe are we...
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with a not too subtle message
The sad reality of those who hunter for trophies
Great presentation to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with a not too subtle message
The sad reality of those who hunter for trophies
Great presentation to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this 5/3/5 lune poetry contest, these poetry types are difficult to sow some meaning in their short refrain, but I think you've done well done, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
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An excellent entry in this 5/3/5 lune poetry contest, these poetry types are difficult to sow some meaning in their short refrain, but I think you've done well done, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
LIke the old salt in Jaws said, we're gonna need a bigger gun. This is very a very clever poem. I like clever poetry. When I come across it, I know a good mind is behind it. Good luck.
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LIke the old salt in Jaws said, we're gonna need a bigger gun. This is very a very clever poem. I like clever poetry. When I come across it, I know a good mind is behind it. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
