Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This three-cubed poem, Light a New Fire, follows the guidelines for the contest and, along with the apt visual, throws down the gauntlet to challenge new minds to find our future that doesn't end in a burning ball between Venus and Mars.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Yes indeed a challenge awaits the Millenials -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from LoveLifeKnight

Exceptional

yes definitely!! I agree, but what would a new fire be, hmmm. thought provoking. this poem is humorous, refreshing and well presented! the picture matches it perfectly and I love the line about bleeping robots

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018

And I love this encouraging review and 6 twinkling stars -thanks for that.zanya

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Hi(,)Homo
Sapien(,)

I only suggest the commas because you used punctuation elsewhere in the poem. what an interesting write here. And the ending, well ... it was cleverly penned. Nothing I would see needs revision or change. Good luck in the contest. Janelle

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks for taking time to read - and commentary zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent cubed poem for the contest
correct to the form
Interesting progression from the early days to the
slow decay of of humanity with debris, politics, and tweets
It's past time to light a new fire
Good luck in the contest
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks for reading - where are we going ? zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-Very good artwork for your poem.
-I like your approach to the topic,
beginning with the introductory question.
-You give very good detail about
changes that have occurred-not
necessarily good ones, like robots
taking over and debris that is scattered.
-I also like 'twitter trolls' and your conclusion.
-A very good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Aug-2018

You are very welcome and deserving, zanya.

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Great entry of the contest! I chuckled when I started the read...Homo....sapians. LOL. your poem reflects the decline of the human race very well. I'm impressed with your take on this topic. Good luck. : )
Judy

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks for those encouraging words zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poignant write and history keeps repeating itself in our world and it is time for us to make changes I think, but will it happen? I doubt it, but we can dream, an enjoyable write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks for a great review zanya