Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery that
creates a peaceful mood.
-The moonlight makes
a good setting, as well.
-You have a good poem;
good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thank you for the comments and review Pam.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is very relaxing. I love the poem and the moonlight on the water painting. Zephyrs is a fun word to say. My personal favorite is serendipity. It rolls off the tongue and makes me smile.

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Hi Thomas. Love the comments. I like to say ... Ethiopia ..... very slowly. Hahaha. Have a great day.