Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Beautiful entry for the contest. I love the serene feel the picture brings with the words. You bring the gentle words to life and the peace the ocean waves bring at night. Good luck in the contest
Judy

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thank you for the good review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This three-five-three poem, Zephyrs, uses the proper syllable formatting and suggests the soft nature of these breezes make calm the heart, mind, and soul. Nice.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 3-5-3 poem and an excellent picture to complement the words perfectly. A moonlit night over the lake is a beautiful sight and also very romantic.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thank you.

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

I love the way you handled the soft breeze here, surely but gently. Moonlit nights so often feature a calm sea with a tender lull of breath in the air. Very peace filled indeed...I was definitely there.
Clever word play
Cheers P

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

That is a lovely entry--from the gorgeous photo, to the beautiful font, to your gentle words. Everything is consistently peaceful and calming. I like the creative use of the word gentle as a verb. I always hesitate to change adjectives into verbs even though I often want to. This one works so well though. It's my favorite part of your poem.
You should do well. Good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thank you so much Debbie.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

It almost seems as if this was written from the point of view of Mother Nature herself, Anonymous Poet.
After all, we mere mortals can't caress the warm winds of a zephyr.
Or can we...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thank you for the great review. I noticed your spooky poem is doing well .... congrats!,

reply by Dean Kuch on 26-Jul-2018

You're very welcome. :)

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

This is an excellent 3 5 3 poetic contest entry about nature and being attuned to it. I have been on that shore, gently swaying to the rhythm of the soft breath of Neptune's zephyrs, dreaming and expecting to be blown to Shangri La. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thank you Henry. Great review! Appreciate the comments.

reply by Henry King on 26-Jul-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Therese103

Excellent

I think this is a great poem for the 3-5-3 contest! Your picture enhances the poem and is very meditative. Great work!
Blessings, Therese

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks Therese.

Comment from BermyBye50

Exceptional

This is a very special poem indeed. The imagery it conveys and the emotions it evokes in a few little words is truly wonderful. Of course being from the island of Bermuda the combination of the artwork together with the poem brings back fond memories of special moments I now cherish.

A great entry in the contest.

Cheers,

Eugene

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks Eugene. I really appreciate your comments and stars. Warm Regards!

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

My Dad had a zephyr when I was little. It was the first car I remembered. I would stand up in front next to him or sit on his lap and drive...caressing zephyrs in moonlight.....did gentle me.
I loved that memory...thanks
God bless

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Hey, thanks for the review. There is another meaning for Zephyr too ... a soft , gentle breeze. Ha, I forgot about the car.