A Child
3 Line Cubed Poem5 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
This is lovely... I think your form is perfect... although I'm not really clear about the form yet. The imagery is perfect. Your poem is very well said and I'm with you... Peace on earth.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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This is lovely... I think your form is perfect... although I'm not really clear about the form yet. The imagery is perfect. Your poem is very well said and I'm with you... Peace on earth.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, education, well presented, creative, good flow, good choice of subject,
easy to read, amazing image to match a mirror reflection, artistic and poetic.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Good read, education, well presented, creative, good flow, good choice of subject,
easy to read, amazing image to match a mirror reflection, artistic and poetic.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments and insights.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Very nice work. So simple yet flows seamlessly. Loved the rhymed parts;birth-earth, fish-wish. Their placement in the poem is excellent. Picture is great with this entry. Hugh
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Very nice work. So simple yet flows seamlessly. Loved the rhymed parts;birth-earth, fish-wish. Their placement in the poem is excellent. Picture is great with this entry. Hugh
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing your incredible insights!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Beautiful inspiring and touching! Clear and powerful message to parents anywhere as well as to all humanity! Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Beautiful inspiring and touching! Clear and powerful message to parents anywhere as well as to all humanity! Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Appreciate very much your insightful comments.Thanks got takings
Comment from GowerHug
Lovely poem with correct criteria for the competition. Nice imagery with each verse following on naturally. The reason for four rather than five stars is that I felt the final verse needed to be more personal relating to the mother and her son. Your final verse seems a little generic - most people, whether mother or not, would want peace. However, this is just my opinion and as stated, I think your work her is very good. Best of luck in the competition ð???
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Lovely poem with correct criteria for the competition. Nice imagery with each verse following on naturally. The reason for four rather than five stars is that I felt the final verse needed to be more personal relating to the mother and her son. Your final verse seems a little generic - most people, whether mother or not, would want peace. However, this is just my opinion and as stated, I think your work her is very good. Best of luck in the competition ð???
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review.