Endless Potential
2-4-6 Contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Marie Foster1
Excellent choice of picture for the subject matter. A very thought provoking message. Certainly one worth sharing. I am not very good at the 2-4-6 count. It looks like a very good entry for the contest. congratulations!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Excellent choice of picture for the subject matter. A very thought provoking message. Certainly one worth sharing. I am not very good at the 2-4-6 count. It looks like a very good entry for the contest. congratulations!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Marie. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Therese103
This is a good thoughtful poem. Children are extremely creative, and we need to foster that by giving them opportunities to learn useful skills that will develop their brains early on. It's so sad to see so many children's minds dulled today by the constant interaction with fake friends and goals in video games. It is an escape from reality.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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This is a good thoughtful poem. Children are extremely creative, and we need to foster that by giving them opportunities to learn useful skills that will develop their brains early on. It's so sad to see so many children's minds dulled today by the constant interaction with fake friends and goals in video games. It is an escape from reality.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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That is for sure. Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Therese. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from RodG
A wonderful pairing of portrait and poem.
Your short poem suggests children can be "taught to create" and I believe that's true only if talent pre-exists. Good choice of rhymes.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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A wonderful pairing of portrait and poem.
Your short poem suggests children can be "taught to create" and I believe that's true only if talent pre-exists. Good choice of rhymes.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Rod. Yeah, you just need to figure out what God given talents they possess. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
