The Book of Fine Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
this written in a conversational dialogue style, very unique. the message is quite dark and foreboding. you used "then" instead of "than" a couple times. good write, Ricky.................meeshu
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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this written in a conversational dialogue style, very unique. the message is quite dark and foreboding. you used "then" instead of "than" a couple times. good write, Ricky.................meeshu
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thanks meeshu, My Grammar?
LOL!!!
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Lady Jane
"Well Damn it(,) Janet!"
Oh dear, oh dear. I hope I'm reading this wrong and suicide isn't on the menu for the night. But, wow, just wow. The dialogue, the flow and form, and presentation are meticulous and fetching. Nothing to revise or correct, minus the minor edit above. Just a well penned story here. Nicely done.
Janelle
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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"Well Damn it(,) Janet!"
Oh dear, oh dear. I hope I'm reading this wrong and suicide isn't on the menu for the night. But, wow, just wow. The dialogue, the flow and form, and presentation are meticulous and fetching. Nothing to revise or correct, minus the minor edit above. Just a well penned story here. Nicely done.
Janelle
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks JaCherie for your Extensive Review and Time!'
Dr. Ricky...
Comment from kahpot
This is shaping up to be a very interesting book the eyes are the windows to the soul and you have expressed this in this read very well, well done and keep writing****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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This is shaping up to be a very interesting book the eyes are the windows to the soul and you have expressed this in this read very well, well done and keep writing****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks kahpot for your fine and extensive Review.
Ricky...
Comment from Van
Suspenseful. I guess the struggle manifests itself in different ways for different folks. An intriguing personification of the conflict, complete with very real, personal language. Wonderfully done.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Suspenseful. I guess the struggle manifests itself in different ways for different folks. An intriguing personification of the conflict, complete with very real, personal language. Wonderfully done.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks for your kind thoughts and review.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem! This poem has a little bit of everything. This person talks to the soul. And about what? I don't know, but I like the poem very much. No mistakes in this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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Excellent poem! This poem has a little bit of everything. This person talks to the soul. And about what? I don't know, but I like the poem very much. No mistakes in this poem.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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Thanks Raul.
I will complete it soon.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
What a wonderful read! I enjoyed your expertise of drawing your readers within the poem by using such descriptive and intense wording. Such a climax! The usage of wording with such an awesome picture captured my imagination. Great Job. Praise God! I saw no errors. Marvelous!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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What a wonderful read! I enjoyed your expertise of drawing your readers within the poem by using such descriptive and intense wording. Such a climax! The usage of wording with such an awesome picture captured my imagination. Great Job. Praise God! I saw no errors. Marvelous!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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Thanks again for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
