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Comment from Insignificant Weed
This is a true expression of faith. It is obvious that the writer has deep-seeded trust in Jesus as her Lord. She finds support in her joys and sorrows from her Savior and is expressing her deep appreciation for this wonderful gift. I am new at reviewing and want to point out here: "When I've lost my direction...?" you probably don't need the question mark. If it said "Have I lost my direction?" you would use the question mark. I might be missing something, so don't take this in a negative fashion.
This is very uplifting for someone with a Christian background. Thanks for sharing. Your passion is catching!
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This is a true expression of faith. It is obvious that the writer has deep-seeded trust in Jesus as her Lord. She finds support in her joys and sorrows from her Savior and is expressing her deep appreciation for this wonderful gift. I am new at reviewing and want to point out here: "When I've lost my direction...?" you probably don't need the question mark. If it said "Have I lost my direction?" you would use the question mark. I might be missing something, so don't take this in a negative fashion.
This is very uplifting for someone with a Christian background. Thanks for sharing. Your passion is catching!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
Comment from Marie Foster1
Good job Rhonnie69. I can see your heart in your poem. It is wonderful to seea young person with so much wisdom and commitment. God bless you with a long life and prosperity.
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Good job Rhonnie69. I can see your heart in your poem. It is wonderful to seea young person with so much wisdom and commitment. God bless you with a long life and prosperity.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018