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Comment from nomi338
Questions, so many questions. Which way is up? Are we going left or right? Are we standing still or are we moving? Which one of us is leading, me are you? Wair, I am you and you are me. Sigh, I am so confused.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Questions, so many questions. Which way is up? Are we going left or right? Are we standing still or are we moving? Which one of us is leading, me are you? Wair, I am you and you are me. Sigh, I am so confused.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Fortunately, this is fantasy and the problem doesn't exist. Now the Push-me-pull-you from Doctor Doolittle may have trouble.
Comment from Ginnygray
A 5-7-7 doublet is a new one for me, Bill. You have the accurate number of syllables for a 5-7-7 twice. The art work enhances your poem and the pachyderm rhinoceri now appears to have been successfully reengineered
and walks in one direction. I would be interested in where on google you found this pic! Very creative and well done!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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A 5-7-7 doublet is a new one for me, Bill. You have the accurate number of syllables for a 5-7-7 twice. The art work enhances your poem and the pachyderm rhinoceri now appears to have been successfully reengineered
and walks in one direction. I would be interested in where on google you found this pic! Very creative and well done!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Type in elephino pictures
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Wow, thanks!
Comment from judiverse
How about pairing and elephant and a donkey? You'd never get them to walk in the same direction. Glad the elephinos were engineered to walk in the same direction. Interesting concept. Humorous and thought-provoking, as I've been reading about "designer babies," created to the parents' specifications. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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How about pairing and elephant and a donkey? You'd never get them to walk in the same direction. Glad the elephinos were engineered to walk in the same direction. Interesting concept. Humorous and thought-provoking, as I've been reading about "designer babies," created to the parents' specifications. judi
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Judi. I can't imagine a Donkephant. Both ends would have butts and they'd both be talking out of them.
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You're welcome. I wonder which end could make the most noise. judi
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, well presented, creative way of thinking, creative use of words, unusual image, modified nature in the wild, easy to read.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Good read, educational, well presented, creative way of thinking, creative use of words, unusual image, modified nature in the wild, easy to read.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Angela. I might borrow your Artistic Elephant for my next elephino piece. Is that okay?
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You're welcome, feel free i got no idea how it works... its all new to me! love to see the poem,
i done one about baby hippo on note pad, it said write round me i'm swimming! lol
Comment from damommy
Like a Push Me - Pull You in Dr. Doolittle. An elephino would be a sight to see, whichever direction they took.
Great picture. Did you create it?
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Like a Push Me - Pull You in Dr. Doolittle. An elephino would be a sight to see, whichever direction they took.
Great picture. Did you create it?
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks, da