Go Figure...
The age old dilemma15 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I really like this slightly sardonic Antonym poem because it describes so many relationships. Some people are indeed "whatyou see is what you get," where's many others are so complex you never "figure them out."
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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I really like this slightly sardonic Antonym poem because it describes so many relationships. Some people are indeed "whatyou see is what you get," where's many others are so complex you never "figure them out."
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thank you Rod for the great review. I agree with your comments completely. Regards.
Comment from rspoet
This is a clever antonym poem and entry for the contest
written in a single smooth sentence.
Excellent choice of antonyms
and interesting art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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This is a clever antonym poem and entry for the contest
written in a single smooth sentence.
Excellent choice of antonyms
and interesting art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much for your support and comments. Appreciated.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this very clever and well thought out poem. The artwork is priceless and compliments beautifully the message conveyed here. You should do well in the contest with this well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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I like this very clever and well thought out poem. The artwork is priceless and compliments beautifully the message conveyed here. You should do well in the contest with this well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks Jeffrey. Much appreciated!
Comment from Hugh McDowell
This is excellent. Relationship issues are always complex. In a difficult format you've condensed the issue we all deal with very concisely. Great job with the in and out. Picture is perfect with this. Hugh
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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This is excellent. Relationship issues are always complex. In a difficult format you've condensed the issue we all deal with very concisely. Great job with the in and out. Picture is perfect with this. Hugh
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much Hugh!! I appreciate your time and review.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very good use of the antonym format, made more so by your interesting choice to use words that, of themselves, are antonyms, but not necessarily by these definitions. It was a clever verbal trick that worked.
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This is a very good use of the antonym format, made more so by your interesting choice to use words that, of themselves, are antonyms, but not necessarily by these definitions. It was a clever verbal trick that worked.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much Michele!! I appreciate the review.
