Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Your poem made me laugh ; so for once the pastor got ' blessed' .ð???

Once my cat peed on our vet's leather bag. I guess it was his way of tell us that he was not too happy about getting his yearly injection .. his revenge was prompt.

You did an excellent job rhyming the words and the pup in the photo is super cute.

I'm happy you like my bio pic ..there are so many people still that don't know cats and dogs can be best of friends .. I love how the cat is on its tippy paws to reach his chin .. "Me and my pal " he 's saying .

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

yep, the pastor got "blessed." that's a cute (and different) way to think of it.
thanks for your neat review. much appreciated.
pome lover

reply by tempeste on 03-Aug-2018

You are welcome. Living with pets makes life far more colourful.
I had a pet squirrel monkey for 10 years ..there was never a dull day , so many funny moments.

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018

I bet. Brave soul!

Comment from BunnyS

Exceptional

Oh my gosh this is cute!! And, so clever!! The fact that I love Beagles, and have three of my own, didn't hurt. It was definitely a tongue twister but every word made sense and didn't come across as forced. You did a great job with this!!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

thanks so much, I don't have a Beagle, but I love them, howls and all.
And muchas gracias for the 6 !!! what a treat!

Comment from LynnetteOK

Excellent

This tongue twister is too cute! (That's as close as I come to writing one ð???). I found myself smiling at the story while tying my tongue in knots to read it. Well done! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

thanks so much. most appreciated!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written tongue twister with alliteration of the letter 'P' that is tough to speak out loudly without messing up somehow. A funny little story to keep the reader interested to read on.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

thanks so much for your kind review

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow I truly loved the pregression of this wonderfully entertaining piece. It was so cute as we followed pups antics and you also put it to rhyme, nicely done

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

thank you! Much appreciated.

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Exceptional

This has got to be one of the top five poems in your repertoire or in the history of poems. It's amazingly enjoyable to read.
Really funny. Pee is for perfect.

I'm going to post Chapter 16 of my murder mystery today.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018

Bless you, MM! You always make me smile.
Much appreciated!!
Will certainly check out your chapter 16.
many thanks again,
pome lover

reply by Marvin Calloway on 20-Jul-2018

You're welcome.
Review 16 while it's still worth something.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the very nature of a dog, Pa's pesky puppy by instinct peed, more or less naturally or politely, after the prayer , checked , but thereafter spurting everywhere; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018

thank you so much.

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Love to read poems about dogs. Cute little puppy picture adds a lot. What you wrote is perfect, almost like a song and telling a story that puppy people go thru. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018

thank you for your neat comments. You are very kind.

Comment from fm wright

Excellent

WOW! You said a mouthful. It must have been fun coming up with all those p words. I really liked the story you put forth in this poem. Also, I don't think you could have chosen a cuter puppy picture to present. Nicely and wonderfully done.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018

thanks so much for your very kind words. I couldn't resist the picture.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh my goodness! If this is not the CUTEST tongue-twisting poem ever!!! Rhyme and meter are spot-on too. This should do VERY well in the contest! Here's wishing your entry much luck!!! :)))))))

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018

thanks so much. Your kind comments are greatly appreciated.

reply by Dawn Munro on 19-Jul-2018

You're most welcome - my pleasure. :)