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Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, yet another fun little poem about the dino elephant, whatever that is. I liked it and as usual you do make me smile. You do have a knack for this. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
Hi Bill, yet another fun little poem about the dino elephant, whatever that is. I liked it and as usual you do make me smile. You do have a knack for this. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from trimple
Hi there, Bill
Well, all I can say to this is... consider the duckbilled platypus!
Evolution is truly wonderful! I mean... Look at us! :)
A fun unirhyme quatrain indeed
kind regards
trimple
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
Hi there, Bill
Well, all I can say to this is... consider the duckbilled platypus!
Evolution is truly wonderful! I mean... Look at us! :)
A fun unirhyme quatrain indeed
kind regards
trimple
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Trim, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Ginnygray
Cute little pachyderm, Elephino!
Akin to the rhino and dinosaur is Wally Wino Elephino. This evolution's final. I really like the unirhyme, "ino"! This particular end rhyme goes well with one quatrain! Great poem, Bill.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
Cute little pachyderm, Elephino!
Akin to the rhino and dinosaur is Wally Wino Elephino. This evolution's final. I really like the unirhyme, "ino"! This particular end rhyme goes well with one quatrain! Great poem, Bill.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Ginny
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You are so welcome, my friend!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well of course when one is messing around in the gene pool, one can also mess around in the word pool, because that is just fino when nothing is really final.
Great job with another entertaining in the series.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
Well of course when one is messing around in the gene pool, one can also mess around in the word pool, because that is just fino when nothing is really final.
Great job with another entertaining in the series.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for "fino" -- was a bit worried about you out there! LOL :) ;) I don't know, is it just me, or does this poor guy look a little cross-eyed...? :) :) Fun rhymes and fun times -- thanx for the smiles, sir, as they are always so very much appreciated!! :)
Yeah -- have to do five stars so Wally doesn't feel dissed compared to the other ones...:) :) :) Thanx for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
Hooray for "fino" -- was a bit worried about you out there! LOL :) ;) I don't know, is it just me, or does this poor guy look a little cross-eyed...? :) :) Fun rhymes and fun times -- thanx for the smiles, sir, as they are always so very much appreciated!! :)
Yeah -- have to do five stars so Wally doesn't feel dissed compared to the other ones...:) :) :) Thanx for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Y
Comment from judiverse
How did he get to be a wino? Cute name. Fun poem. Great rhyme. I don't know about the evolution being fine. It looks like one crazy, mixed up creature. Maybe Congress had a hand in its creation. Clever idea for your series. judi
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
How did he get to be a wino? Cute name. Fun poem. Great rhyme. I don't know about the evolution being fine. It looks like one crazy, mixed up creature. Maybe Congress had a hand in its creation. Clever idea for your series. judi
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Judi. I?m not sure how the elephino got to be a wino other than he drinks to forget.
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I wouldn't be surprised. judi
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Bill, this is a cute little ditty of a poem - from the elephant picture to the simplistic use of - ino - end rhymes. A fun and entertaining read. ~DD
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
Bill, this is a cute little ditty of a poem - from the elephant picture to the simplistic use of - ino - end rhymes. A fun and entertaining read. ~DD
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, DD
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Hi Bill that little rhyme you got going on makes me giggle inside it's cute I love the picture and I think that the poem is really neat as it explains the little elephant shown in the picture
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
Hi Bill that little rhyme you got going on makes me giggle inside it's cute I love the picture and I think that the poem is really neat as it explains the little elephant shown in the picture
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Mary
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My pleasure
Comment from meeshu
very cute and clever, Bill. I like the creatures you create and the Elephino is one of my favorites. that is a great picture too............meeshu
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
very cute and clever, Bill. I like the creatures you create and the Elephino is one of my favorites. that is a great picture too............meeshu
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks, meeshu