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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, yet another fun little poem about the dino elephant, whatever that is. I liked it and as usual you do make me smile. You do have a knack for this. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from trimple
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Hi there, Bill

Well, all I can say to this is... consider the duckbilled platypus!

Evolution is truly wonderful! I mean... Look at us! :)

A fun unirhyme quatrain indeed

kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Trim, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Ginnygray
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Cute little pachyderm, Elephino!
Akin to the rhino and dinosaur is Wally Wino Elephino. This evolution's final. I really like the unirhyme, "ino"! This particular end rhyme goes well with one quatrain! Great poem, Bill.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Ginny
reply by Ginnygray on 17-Jul-2018
    You are so welcome, my friend!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well of course when one is messing around in the gene pool, one can also mess around in the word pool, because that is just fino when nothing is really final.

Great job with another entertaining in the series.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Hooray for "fino" -- was a bit worried about you out there! LOL :) ;) I don't know, is it just me, or does this poor guy look a little cross-eyed...? :) :) Fun rhymes and fun times -- thanx for the smiles, sir, as they are always so very much appreciated!! :)

Yeah -- have to do five stars so Wally doesn't feel dissed compared to the other ones...:) :) :) Thanx for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Y
Comment from judiverse
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How did he get to be a wino? Cute name. Fun poem. Great rhyme. I don't know about the evolution being fine. It looks like one crazy, mixed up creature. Maybe Congress had a hand in its creation. Clever idea for your series. judi

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Judi. I?m not sure how the elephino got to be a wino other than he drinks to forget.
reply by judiverse on 17-Jul-2018
    I wouldn't be surprised. judi
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Bill, this is a cute little ditty of a poem - from the elephant picture to the simplistic use of - ino - end rhymes. A fun and entertaining read. ~DD

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, DD
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Hi Bill that little rhyme you got going on makes me giggle inside it's cute I love the picture and I think that the poem is really neat as it explains the little elephant shown in the picture

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Mary
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 23-Jul-2018
    My pleasure
Comment from meeshu
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very cute and clever, Bill. I like the creatures you create and the Elephino is one of my favorites. that is a great picture too............meeshu

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
    Thanks, meeshu