Comment from Robbie Yates

Excellent

Cool, celestial poem, Rhonnie! I like how you wove in the planets' names, and the internal rhyme in lines like, "Mommy said that overhead" and "Starlight, star bright, every star you see at night."

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

Ronnie this is so well rhymed and has such an uplifting melody that reading your words gave me such a joyous feeling, you scored here with this delightful poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

HELLO DOLLY: I thank you, and I thank you. You have always been extremely helpful and encouraging toward me. People like you are my motivation to write. I try diligently to entertain my reader fans, because I've learned that that's what my readers want. You understand me, Dolly. I regret that I cannot write the words to express just how much I appreciate that, if I haven't done that already; but I try. And I'll keep on trying. I shall write on and on with a child's heart, and from a child's point of view. I am a children's writer. And I'm loving every God given moment of it. There's more to come. Keep watching, you'll see. Thank you my dear friend, Dolly. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent and nicely done poetry. The artwork is absolutely beautiful and perfect for the subject of your writing. It is an inspirational and though inspiring piece of writing. I enjoyed every word.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

Comment from Miranda Langston

Excellent

this is a very creative poem with an interesting rhyme scheme. I found it rather unique that you put the bible verses underneath the poem, too. nicely written :)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018