Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Hooray! :) :) I absolutely love your poem.....so very well conveys the mood you've discussed -- great job!

Sending you and your lovely wife sunshine and smiles from the other side of the world!

Yvette ;)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thanks mate I just finished adding the extra photos as you suggested on the story.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I'm glad you chose to share your car advertisement with us. I can see you have a good sense of humor. Even though it is short, you did a fine job with the poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thanks friend. Someone suggested I add more photos and I am in the process of doing that. They said I could write a story on each photo hehe. I originally had $AUD4,999 on the car back when it was still registered and gradually came down in price but oh well we can't drive it now so whatever. Cheers.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Hello again--thanks for sharing your poetic Facebook advertisement. I enjoyed your rhyme and hope your old pal finds a good home soon. (I like your taste in colors--my Prius is blue too!) Best wishes- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Yeah well I had a suggestion to add more photos and write something for each photo a story hehe. I am changing that now. Come back and look at either this or the other story. Thaniks again.

reply by Joan E. on 14-Jul-2018

I checked and found the string of photos for the "End of an Era" post. Thanks for the heads-up. Happy weekend- Joan

reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Looks like we might have a sale today.

reply by Joan E. on 14-Jul-2018

I hope they brought cash! Congrats- Joan

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A thousand Aussie bucks without rego is still a very good deal stay your ground someone will take it away, this is an excellent short poem, very well written and good luck****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thanks friend been seeing stuff of yours sitting up there for reviewing get to ya soon. It is a damn good car this is what hurts so bad. Did you see my comment about the nut wanting it for $999 with insurance?

reply by kahpot on 13-Jul-2018

Yes I did and can understand why you call him a nut he may as well asked for it for nothing and he pays rego****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This rhyming couplet, Out Front Today, falls right into garage sale season and just on the cusp of new car sales. Maybe you should rent it out on a day basis and make a killing.

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

haha Bill if it was still registered. and insured which it os both NOT. Besides we would have to pay business insurance to rent it out, and the income may prejudice our Pensions, hehe. I forget where you are sorry? Thanks for coming by.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

some advice for you Sankey, if you put a FREE sign on it, nobody wants it. but put a sign that says $1000.00 and someone will steal it. good write...........meeshu

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thanks I have got $AUD999.00 on it. I would not mind if they stole it if we still had it insured,l but I cancelled that the other day, too. Thanks again.