Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ten-word poem, We Belong Together, presented with thirteen syllables in two lines, represents the mysteries of life and love and the opening of these miracles with the right pair of lovers. Nice.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. Much appreciated.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent ten word poem for the contest
With a fine lock and key theme
Perfect picture to match your words
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thank you for the read and your feedback. Much appreciated.

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Anon
Very good.
10 words is hardly the Gettysburg Address and to convey anything in such a small space is a great achievement.
In passing - and with great respect for your words, and only to provoke you in a positive way - have you considered reversing the two lines?
"...You are the precious lock;
I have the loving key..."
Just a thought - to be disregarded as you see fit: as I say, I mean you no disrespect.
And I wish you well in both the contest and your further writing.
Cheers
phill

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

I like your idea and I may implement it. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Much appreciated.