She'll Always Be Here
10 Word Poem contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, She'll Always Be Here, presented with fifteen syllables in three lines, brings the memory of a passed, beautiful soul into the present for a fond, musical reunion. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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This ten-word poem, She'll Always Be Here, presented with fifteen syllables in three lines, brings the memory of a passed, beautiful soul into the present for a fond, musical reunion. Nice.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Bill. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from l.raven
my grandmother passed many years ago....but I still hear her...and see her in so many way...I love the wording in your poem...so very nicely written...love Linda...xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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my grandmother passed many years ago....but I still hear her...and see her in so many way...I love the wording in your poem...so very nicely written...love Linda...xxoo
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the beautiful review, Linda. Our grandmothers will always be in our hearts. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from kathleenspalding
Aw, a sweet story told using only ten well-chosen words. Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual appearance. I see nothing to correct. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Aw, a sweet story told using only ten well-chosen words. Excellent use of artwork, color and font for a pleasing visual appearance. I see nothing to correct. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Kathleen. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
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You're welcome and thank you, you have a good weekend, too.
Comment from BeasPeas
A nostalgic poem that brings back memories of grandma singing. Some objects do remind us of those in our past. Appropriately illustrated for your theme. Nicely composed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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A nostalgic poem that brings back memories of grandma singing. Some objects do remind us of those in our past. Appropriately illustrated for your theme. Nicely composed. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Marilyn. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
What a wonderful memory. My great-grandparents had an old organ that had a foot pump to supply the air for the windpipes. When I was small I used to lay on the floor and work the pump while my great-grandmother played.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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What a wonderful memory. My great-grandparents had an old organ that had a foot pump to supply the air for the windpipes. When I was small I used to lay on the floor and work the pump while my great-grandmother played.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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That would be a great memory to hold onto. Thank you for the excellent review, Thomas. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine ten word poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and extension to memories
Perfect poem to photograph match
and presentation.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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This is a very fine ten word poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and extension to memories
Perfect poem to photograph match
and presentation.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, RS. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a great weekend.
