A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Yes."Wisdom calls Aloud.
3 total reviews
Comment from Robbie Yates
Ooh I'm really intrigued by this contest. Great one-line poem - short and yet it contains a story, and alludes to a history, and develops a character. Great stuff, Rhonnie!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Ooh I'm really intrigued by this contest. Great one-line poem - short and yet it contains a story, and alludes to a history, and develops a character. Great stuff, Rhonnie!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Heeeey Robbie. Thanks loads for your review. Yo.Your poem, GRASS," is pretty cool. Just why moms and teachers aren't cool with stuff that we find while we're rolling around in the grass eludes my understanding. Mom was afraid of everything that creeps or crawls. Perhaps if she'd known that the snail in, "GRASS," was a girl...she'd had a different opinion about beetles, bugs, and snails and cool stuff. Good job well done here, Robbie. Let's continue to have fun, Dude. I'll be seeing you around. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice One Line Poem delivers a worthwhile and uplifting message. Excellent use of artwork. I see nothing to correct. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest!
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Very nice One Line Poem delivers a worthwhile and uplifting message. Excellent use of artwork. I see nothing to correct. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about justice in appreciation of morality and ethics; if you are able, you should provide good to one who deserves for; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks about justice in appreciation of morality and ethics; if you are able, you should provide good to one who deserves for; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018