Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

What an amazing photo to compliment your beautiful 5/7/5 poem.
I loved each line giving excellent and sage advice.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Kahpot, hope you are well my sweet friend...I love your poem...love the wording ...go through your journey honorably...know your worth...I checked on the contest...but it is through fanstory...very well written you...and I love your picture...God Bless...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot

reply by l.raven on 10-Jul-2018

your so very welcome my sweet friend...love xxoo

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Beautiful image to accompany excellent advice in your 5-7-5 poem. More and more I see people retreat into their shells--able but unwilling to engage in a world that is harder and harder to deal with.

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes it is hard sometimes****kahpot

reply by karenina on 11-Jul-2018

You are very welcome....

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 and the nuggets of wisdom it carries. You complied with rules for writing this poetic form and you did well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Shanbreen

Excellent

Wonderful Kahpot. I love the "claiming" of destiny. Thanks for the advise on how life is lived. =). While the painting is superb as paintings go, I wonder if it projects your sage advice. Wishing you all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much, I will visit the picture****kahpot

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a beautiful dogma to define one's path -- and in so very few words! ;) :) Your words blend together so wonderfully that they almost cry out for a soft melody that ends in a wonderful crescendo! :)

Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, easy to read, creative use of words, good creative image, colourful sky, reflection beaming through the trees leaving a wonderful glow, poem is short but has a lot of meaning.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpt

reply by Angela Hayes on 10-Jul-2018

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Comment from SarahPenn1

Excellent

This is good advice, as it tells one to start their own journey, which requires courage, to be honourable in everything that they do from then onwards. This shows that our destiny isn't handed to us- we must earn it, and write it

Kudos
S

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a powerful and beautiful message your poem conveys. This is a compelling 5-7-5 formatted poem and it's a great entry for the contest. Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Great advice summed up in a few syllables, kahpot. Those syllables are correct in number per line. However what stands out is your great & true message about striving for one's goals in life. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot