Reviews from

Letter to the President (Part 2)

sick of the Left's hate machine (Part 2)

17 total reviews 
Comment from Mustang Patty
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi there,

Again, as in Part 1, you have expressed your views in a clear and concise manner. The letter is well organized, and your thoughts about the education system are presented in a well-thought-out approach.

Your rant is justified, but I remind you that no one really gave President Obama a chance either. Everything he tried to do was blocked by the Republican majority in the House and the Senate.

(just a point to ponder...)

~patty~

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Dear Patty, I am not really an American citizen yet, I am just a green card holder for barely six months. I don't know much about Obama, I only know he is a Socialist and was raised by a Communist father. I just cannot trust a Socialist for his views which are opposed to the conservative ideals for which America was founded. Do you think the Republicans will allow a Socialist President to change America into what it is not? Perhaps that's the reason why he had a rough time with the Conservatives.
Comment from giraffmang
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi there,

I have to say that it is a brave thing to 'get up' and express these views on the wider stage, although a certain degree of anonymity certainly helps in these matters.

It is generally well written and you get the points across very well indeed. More of the same from the previous instalment.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Thanks a lot my friend for reminding me of the rough world I might get into with my personal rants and not protecting my identity. So you share my views that the American Left tends to attack violently those opposed to their views. I am scared too, who would not, with the climate of hatred and vitriol we are witnessing now. But I am nobody here in America, I have no voice for I cannot even vote in election. I am just a green card holder, a legal US permanent resident for barely six months. But I have learned to love your country and what it stands for. I am Socialist-phobic and I don't subscribe to their ideals. Expressing my views is the only thing I can contribute to open the eyes of the brainwashed citizens to the ills of Socialism. All the best. Susan
Comment from Liberty Justice
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

SIX STARS 6******. My goodness, dear poet, was a highly intellectual writing displaying your strong emotional opinions about the educational system, especially. Your words are so high IQ with well spoken details about your diverse views of our American system. VERY HIGH PROFILE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Oh my dear Liberty Justice, thank you very much for the exceptional six stars. Words won't be enough to express my appreciation for giving merits to my humble work. Thank you very much from the bottom of my heart. God bless. Susan
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This should be at the top of the nightly news and taught in every university in America. My Stepson graduated college. When people ask me what he studied, I say Obama.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Thanks again my friend for a very generous and positive review of my personal rants. I am deeply humbled and overwhelmed by the six stars. Thank you very much. Take care. Susan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This speaks an open letter to the US President Trump about educational policies, commendable derogatory attitudes, political impositions, maladies seeking for freedom; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Thanks a lot for very heartwarming review and thanks too for the generous stars. God bless.
Comment from meeshu
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

does it excite you to see the trend under Trump going toward trade schools, where one can master a marketable skill. the best way to curtail the "indoctrination factories" is to expose them as pointless. I think maybe Chewee makes more sense with his "deeds" than Schumer does with his. keep going, nassus...........you have the wind in your sails.............meeshu

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Thanks a lot my dear friend, thank you for following my work and including them in a bookcase. I am overwhelmed with your interest in my humble piece. Thank you very much, words won't be enough to express my gratitude for reading my work. Thanks a bunch. Susan
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hey, it was a treat to find part two already. Yes.

Couple of typos. the fight to depend (defend) the American public education system which was completely overtaken by the radical Left.

down the conservative voice in (the) majority of American

So are you referring to Berkeley University stopping Milo Yiannopoulos's speech. He was eventually fired from Breitbart News because he was advocating pedophilia. Which I thought wrong of Breitbart by the way as they so favour free-speech and saying anything you want to at all, and you'll be judged by the law of man or God. I personally think Yiannopoulos is totally wrong, pedophilia is evil and so is a lot of the hate speech passing as free speech in political incorrectness these days. But Breitbart doesn't espouse my Conservative ideology. Or perhaps Ann Coulter?

I didn't know about Evergreen so I will be researching that. So right you are about, Saul Alinsky's seminal Rules for Radicals for the Alt-Right. Have you read that book? It IS radical.

I very much enjoy the person part of your essay, and yes Harvard is quite under attack as being prejudiced to Asian students, at least according to Breitbart News.

I disagree about the Millenials. I think they are the most responsible, thoughtful generation raised. They will vote according to their conscience, not along political lines.

I agree the education system needs to be re-examined for efficiencies as not everyone with a triple PhD can start in senior management. Someone has to pick the produce, yes?

We've learned now that Democrats are responsible for slavery. *cough* A Republican NEVER owned a slave. *double cough* Democrats were against civil rights legislation and it the Republicans that got it all passed. We gotta love that Strom Thurmand, a picture of him hanging in every black household in Nambiaville!

Another great job and looking forward to part three. :)

Gloria








This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Thanks a lot Gloria for the typo correction, I will rectify the said slips. Thanks a lot, that we are discussing and exchanging views in a rational and civil way . i hope America will be blessed more with God's divine providence. God bless my poet-friend. Susan