Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I think this is a wonderful entry for the we the people contest... This is beautifully written great good luck.
"Courageous hearts and firm resolve,
a cadre of men strong and true.
Demanded the right to dissolve
tyrannical rule of the few."

Yours, diana

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks so much.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent and you would think after all this time the heads of today would understand and take some notice of words such as these, very well written and best wishes for your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks so much. I really appreciate your great review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a remembrance of fourth July the American Independence Day when America got freedom from Great Britain, patriots who sacrificed for the achievement; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks so much for your comments and great review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Patriots were doing the next right thing never thinking they would be heroes ..but doing the next right thing...standing up worked then...wouldn't it be great to recapture that early patriotism
Well penned
God bless

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 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks! I agree, we all need to remember what freedom costs. Thanks for the great review.