Comment from meeshu

Good

this is a very unique post, Ricky it certainly covers a lot of topics in an excellent dialogue form. very different style of poetry. good job..............meeshu

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an amazing and intriguing read a wonderful story and thank you very much for the Intro letting us know who the characters were, very well done and I look forward to the next chapter****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time kahpot.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Hey Dr. Ricky... this is sooooo cool... i loved this especially creepy phrase. Great read and enjoyed ever creepy but great word. thanks so much yours, diana

"He calls himself...
'The Gate Keeper.'
"So, I tell him my name and he replies...
"Welcome to Hades Mother Fucker!"
"You messed up!"
"We heard about you!"
"The Priest with the Least!"
He Laughs.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Artasylum and the next chapter is HOT!!
DR. Ricky

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the distinct, clear and unambiguous thought portrays the state and status of mind, head and heart, symbolic of stand of life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
This is still in 'The Preview Mode.'My phone died last night.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Yep there's a pretty dramatic looking picture there. Now did you fall and break yourself up if so the picture definitely displays that with all those bandages it has a twist of Comedy to when you just look at the picture.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018

I fell down whole running away from Michael's monster.
This is still in Preview but there is more now!
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 02-Jul-2018

It was a very interesting read thank you for sharing. Now my piece on ask your dad my latest piece is up for votes tomorrow I think will you consider reviewing it and voting. Thanks in advance it's always wonderful when someone takes the time out to read what you put on paper and then take the time to share their opinion. I will be on the lookout though will your future work. Thanks