Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Good work on this five line poem for the contest. (especially since it's your first one)
Excellent sentiment and philophy.

Good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am delighted you used the 5-Line form for a self-improvement poem, especially since it is short enough to become a mantra or post on the refrigerator! Here's to "results" and best wishes in the contest--also, keep stretching your wings and having fun- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

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Comment from Brigitte Elko

Exceptional

This message earned a sixer because it is very well penned. I enjoyed reading this and it is a message that needs to be shared. "Put your money where your mouth is," came to mind. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.

Have a safe 4th of July.
Brigitte

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes put your money where your mouth is, a lot need to do this, many thanks****kahpot

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Friend!
Your well-crafted 5/7/5 speaks volumes! Take action; don't just wish or pray for whatever needs to be done. Go out and get whatever needs to be done, done! I embrace and fully support the premiss and message! Thank you for sharing!

diane

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi there Kahpot
This is an excellent five line poem. Such a powerful message and so true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

smiles to you kahpot what you said in your five line poem you are so right dreaming and wishing for something to happen no way will take place until we take action and make our wish and dream come into existence
Gert

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Kahpot, a perfect five line poem written true to form with a good strong message. Not easy to get messages across in these short forms but you have done so, and very well. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a lovely philosophical sentiment dear kahpot! daydreaming is a delightful pastime but if you need things done is to think ahead.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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Comment from Cedar

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. My wife uses the very same words on me occasionally. Her translation of these words of wisdom is, "Get off your ass and go do something."

I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes wives have a different way with words****kahpot

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

Uh-oh and I am such a wishful thinker! This is a great little poem. This is one of those that should be posted in workplaces and schools. Profound, short, but to the point. I like it very much! Great job and Good Luck with this one!
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

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