Fat again
Must start dieting AGAIN9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
No writer you came and sat right on my living room couch with me because that's just where I am. LOL I'm eating fried fish now and speak with fried okra and a bowl of grits so my will begin with, tomorrow I will start my diet, but today I'm going to eat whatever I will.
And I'll end it with: tomorrow I will start my diet and my goal is is lose 10 lb and I will start tomorrow.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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No writer you came and sat right on my living room couch with me because that's just where I am. LOL I'm eating fried fish now and speak with fried okra and a bowl of grits so my will begin with, tomorrow I will start my diet, but today I'm going to eat whatever I will.
And I'll end it with: tomorrow I will start my diet and my goal is is lose 10 lb and I will start tomorrow.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Hi Mary. I'm glad you enjoy your food too. Thanks for the great review
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Thanks but I must do better and I am going to and that is for Real
Comment from mkflood
It doesn't help none when food is advertised on TV. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor of having my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again... MKFLOOD
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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It doesn't help none when food is advertised on TV. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor of having my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again... MKFLOOD
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thanks for thanking me when it is me that should be thanking you. I adore your work and am so pleased that you think mine works well with it. Love Jen. X
Comment from Boogienights
You are seriously describing my life right now. I think I have started and stopped hundreds of diets in my lifetime, but to no avail. I love your contest entry, it speaks to me. Best wishes for a win.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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You are seriously describing my life right now. I think I have started and stopped hundreds of diets in my lifetime, but to no avail. I love your contest entry, it speaks to me. Best wishes for a win.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from rama devi
Hilarious! Superb satire. Excellent entry for this unusual contest. You did a great job with the closing twist. Fine bouncy beat and rhymes. Superb irony. Having recently put on a few hard-to-lose pounds, this made me grin and nod.
Chuckling,
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Hilarious! Superb satire. Excellent entry for this unusual contest. You did a great job with the closing twist. Fine bouncy beat and rhymes. Superb irony. Having recently put on a few hard-to-lose pounds, this made me grin and nod.
Chuckling,
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks. So glad you like it
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:-))
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Start and Ends The Same' writing prompt.
Your verse is fun and tells to well of the struggle so many of us have.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Start and Ends The Same' writing prompt.
Your verse is fun and tells to well of the struggle so many of us have.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks Sharon
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
so I'll eat as much as I can
Today.
LOL! Makes sense to me. After all, tomorrow you may starve. Dieting is so easy, providing you always begin tomorrow. :)
Good job!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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so I'll eat as much as I can
Today.
LOL! Makes sense to me. After all, tomorrow you may starve. Dieting is so easy, providing you always begin tomorrow. :)
Good job!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from elainec4
Enjoyed reading your work. The title enticed me to click and read! And I could easily understand and identify with your sentiments. Entertaining. thanks for sharing. elaine
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Enjoyed reading your work. The title enticed me to click and read! And I could easily understand and identify with your sentiments. Entertaining. thanks for sharing. elaine
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from Janilou
LOL
Yes I'll start tomorrow
without further delay
so I'll eat as much as I can
Today.
Having struggled with weight control all my life since my teen years, I had to laugh at this tongue-in-cheek poem. Very cute. I have managed to keep eighty pounds off for nine years and it never ceases to be a challenge! :-)
I enjoyed your poem.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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LOL
Yes I'll start tomorrow
without further delay
so I'll eat as much as I can
Today.
Having struggled with weight control all my life since my teen years, I had to laugh at this tongue-in-cheek poem. Very cute. I have managed to keep eighty pounds off for nine years and it never ceases to be a challenge! :-)
I enjoyed your poem.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful and isn't this the thought of everyone as we all seem to put off what we know we have to do, very well done with great artwork good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Wonderful and isn't this the thought of everyone as we all seem to put off what we know we have to do, very well done with great artwork good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Many thanks Kahpot.
